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It hurts.... Thank you for writing this.
~There was an error: "as her mother's friend were there is was a quick and somber"
~Should be - 'as her mother's friends were there. It was a quick and somber'
Also in the description, male mare should be mail mare.
(If you ever need an editor, feel free to look me up)
You used the wrong mail in the description.
... I'm a bit lost for words right now... How about here's a favorite? Will that do? Now excuse me as I go cry myself to sleep... P.S. Damn that was touching...
That was sad. I did spot some errors in spelling, but only, like, three or so.
Anyway, good story, keep writing!
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Thank you for the comment. I appreciate the feedback. :)
No problem. Seriously, there wasn't really anything wrong with the story line,. You did a great job.
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Thanks, next time I'm feeling motivated enough to write a story I'll make sure to do so. :) have a good day!
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No thanks, it's fine not many people view it anyway.
Hmm, very touching story. I think this is first story I've read of its type. Great job with the story here, it is worth the read. :)
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Thank you, it's the first story I ever wrote and I spent a few hours typing it on my phone and editing. Glad you like it :)