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Rofldude 21141

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    Rofldude's Stories (2)

    • Teaching through mystical eyes
      Old Dragon, Spike, Teaching

      6,886 words · 431 views · 29 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Halo: Brony Evolved
      A Teleportation test and two unusal Spartans....guess where their Destination will be?
      3,898 words · 609 views · 77 likes · 17 dislikes

    The UNSC is testing a new teleportation device for transportation, what will go wrong?

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    Thanks to Mil Spec Brony, Derpy Foreve, for the help and for you guys supporting me, you're really helping me out guys, thanks you :)

    also thanks to Avehand and Petmo that helped me at the beginning, won't forget you guys :D

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    re-written.. don't wonder!

    First Published
    11th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    30th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 36 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The Prologue looks a bit same as when Kestrel and Pes- pedro... MR.P  is together. Oh well.... I' ll still read it tho

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1330616

    i'll try to make it as same as it was but the next chapter is much more different than the older one

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1330620 I don't really care if it is going to be the same or different at this point. I'm sure I will enjoy nonetheless. :pinkiehappy:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    dude hahaha

    a fine start with the RvsB rev.

    and now it makes more sens of why he get sent to equestria, hes is just going where he belongs huh?

    and now that the I.A is there it wont surprise us...

    would have tough that pedmo would still be there for him being the reason to find you no matter what the cost...

    but hay its not my story...

    cant wait till next chap

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1330681>>1330783

    thanks guys :) thanks for the support

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I kept forgetting who was who in the last one, this one will be much clearer, thanks! :yay::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile::raritywink::ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    MY NIPPLES HUNGER FOR MOAR!

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    what happened to the other guy?

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1331983

    well he isn't there anymore

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I think this one might be better without ..... whats his face.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1332570 lol, no seriously that made me smile and i don't know why

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    “It’s lightish red... not pink.” Ah the memories.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ahhh yes, i just... i know i've read this story before, but now i am reading it for a second time (rewritten of course) and it still makes me smile.

    Good beginning and Fluttershy is my favorite pony (i want a plushie too) so that only makes it even more fun.

    Keep up the good stuff.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 7h ago · · ·
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    here we all are again look like we went back in time only with a more easier to read story:twilightsheepish:

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1356452

    :yay: the next chapter is already finished, only needs to be prereaden by my prereader

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hrm Ye Need Capitalize The i  

    Here Example i widened my eyes.. she was right.. i would never ever dream of Victoria. I widened my eyes etc I would Etc

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1363753 thanks, oh wait i forgot something to wrote in the story. shit.

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1363823 what exactly did you expect? so maybe i can put it in the next chapter :yay:

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1363839 Was expecting him to run around in ponyville screaming like a girl chased by angry mob thinking he abducted Fluttershy  and ended anti-climatically in some way.

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1363852 mhhh... alriight i already know something :D

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>1363857 Your going to use that for the new chapters arent ya?:rainbowhuh:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1364099 i dunno, what do you mean?

    :applejackconfused::ajsmug:

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1358359 um are the unsc going to invade the planet again i mean the kinda made no sence last time

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1358359 um are the unsc going to invade the planet again i mean the kinda made no sence last time

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1364218 just keep reading :yay:

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yep this is awesome.

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    fucking awesome.

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    interesting...

    i guess that the paint at some point will fail and start to wear off...

    the plots OW THE PLOTS!!!

    i like this where its going, you could show off at the royal guards hehehe

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This has so much win its flooding out its ass.

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1365181 oooh so many plots.. SOOO MANY INDEED :D

    >>1365226 D: i take that as a compliment

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    lol i have to admit this story change was for the best great read

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1404693 Yea.. i have now much more free roaming in the story but i am pretty slower of course, really big writing blockades right now in the last time but i try my to finish the next chapter

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 4d ago · · ·
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    What happened to this story?

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1566630

    still writing on it but i am pretty busy so it will take it's time

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