..... hey its this guy!

......YAY! rule 34 at its best! plus first!?

Thumbed up scystorm, clop may not be my cup of tea  but at least i respect the effort :p keep up the good work

Aaaaand I have a new author to track.

Excellent start, and I can't wait to see this series continue.

I'm not normally one given to reading Clopfiction these days but I couldn't resist when I saw you wrote something. I loved this little story despite it lacking in story, though it had it's fare share of plot, yeah I know bad joke

I do like where DAsh's suggestion is going, ie a herd-like multi-way (six-way) relationship within the mane six which is a great idea for a clopfiction series, if all the chapters are in the universe.

I'll go post ideas in the forum thread.

...wait for the day when I write clopfiction with a deeper plotline.

Please don't.

I'm fine with clop. I've read a lot back when I was actually into it.

I can say without a doubt that in every story (not just premise) based clopfic I have ever read either the clop was lessened by the story or the story was lessened by the clop. This also goes for every work of erotic fiction that tried to get literary and every novel that decided to get explicit.

SEX is fine. You can put all the sex, fucking, love scenes and steamy make-outs you want into a story as long as it's not explicit. Straight up masturbatory material explicit clop is better off in a format such as this.

Good stuff!

Tracking...

Sweet Celestia of Equestria! Excellent work here. I loved it.

At first I was a bit skeptical as to how well a non-story based clop would hold up being over eight thousand words long. You pulled it off though, I surprisingly didn't get bored at all while reading it. Good work.

I'm assuming you won't mind if I recommend this to everyone in my next chapter of What Happens in Ponyville? Although I highly doubt it will need any help at all getting the recognition it deserves.

(God I hope my recommendation gets through, I could easily just write it myself, but that's not the point. I'd love to see something I want written, written well by someone else.)

Sweet mother of Celestia.

You damn dirty dog. WHY DO I LIKE THIS STORY?!

Favorite....

Variety is the spice of life, so I definitely hope you do some without sex toys, they're kind of a turn-off for me.

What the...

Wow. I have no clue why, but this clop is making me laugh more than any comedy I've read.

Perhaps it's the fact that I'm writing a TwiDash ATM, and it makes this hilarious, or maybe just the concept and the charmingly blunt dialogue.

Any which way, this is actually pretty good for clop. Keep on truckin'!

Oh god Scy.

Oh... my.....

Yep that's me

Hey

Hey

Show don't tell

SHOW DON'T TELL

SHOW

DON'T

TELL

ESPECIALLY FOR SEX BECAUSE IT'S HOTTER THAT WAY

Very sexy.

Wow... Great job Scy. Especially since it's your first "clop" fic.

I know I'm weird for saying this, but the "Species" lines threw me off a bit. Just my headcanon telling me there are three "races" of the "species" of ponies.

Otherwise it was really good all around. I'm lOoking forward to more.

>> NaturalGlitch What's wrong with fullfiling wishes? That seems like a positive to me. :P

*le track* *le fave*

Dear Princess Celestia

Do you want to ... you know

Do  it?

Your faithful student Twilight Sparkle

:molestia:

>>294464294464

Feel free to recommend it! It would make me super happy!

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good job

now i have to go to class...

Why oh why...

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...do I like to read these?

I'm NOT tracking and I'm NOT favoriting but this story is on my radar. If Fluttershy has to be involved in some lesbian orgy, then I'm leaving...

Edit: Dammit, now I'm tracking it!!

This has got to be one of that most detailed clopfics I've ever read. And it's TwiDash! That makes it, like, 238 times more awesome.

now if only they made an animation of this......... ANIMATORS! THAT'S YOUR CALL!

generally not one for clop, but this one i must say is exceptional

i got a little freaked out when i saw the word "whinny" though. cause then i'm thinkin of horses.

but the rest of it was pretty cool.

>>294294294294

Have you read Romance Reports?

that was really good! But i like alittle bit of more backstory and a plot itself but this was really nice

wait a minnit, you're gonna write something for us Gay bronies TOO?

WOOHOO!

Why did I read this, WHY!?!?  Much more disturbing, why did I like it so much  

I saw the title and tracked this.

I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING.

And I am feeling Pinkie Keen.

...

That was good.

...

Yep. Can't deny it anymore. I'm a furry.

...

Shit.

what in TARNATION are sex lips!?

Also, how did Dash fit her tongue in Twi's vajayjay?

"Never forget what species I am, Rainbow." I think you mean race. It is canon, unicorns, pegasi, and earth ponies are different races of the pony species.

"Her arousal dripping onto the floor below her." Um, arousal is not a liquid.

"Sending her feminine juices out onto the sheets" Seriously? feminine juices? I'm sorry, but that phrase is so...old-fashioned. It sounds like something that would be said by someone 60 years ago, and then that person would be gossiped about for being lewd.

Anyway, despite the flaws above, this has potential and was pretty hot in some parts, mostly in the beginning. 3 1/4 stars, and I've reccomended this to a friend. If I could figure out how to favorite it (no one will tell me!) I might, till then, tracking.

Okay, can't rate right now for some reason... oh well. The point is I liked it, but you need to research terms for lady bits so you don't look ignorant.

>>296323296323

You favorite it by using the Star on the left. It's next to the name of the fic! Try reading the site FAQ some time if you're having trouble. :) Also, there are no more star ratings, it's Like or Dislike now.

Also, please don't call me ignorant~ I know how lady parts work. I'm being creative with my terminology whether you like it or not. "Species" however is an error I hadn't gotten around to correcting yet. Now I have!

Very good, overall.  Personally, I like story elements in my clop, so the bluntness with which this handled itself sort of threw me off.  The quality of the clop made up for it, though, so it all worked out.  Plus, TwiDash is one of my favourite ships, so that helped.

And then I find out you're going to continue this series?  Nice.

>>296227296227

You say that like it's a bad thing.

>>296394296394

'kay. sorry

>>296419296419

You say that like it's not a bad thing.

Oh my. I've read some clopfics in my time but this is one that takes the cake over most.

...besides some of Semi's own work, that is. Very descriptive, very passioniate, very naughty. I loved it.

This will be the first and probably only clop I will track.

Also, clopfic + classical music =

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I feel like a sir.

DAMN!

DAMN, DAMN, DAMN, DAMN, DAMNATION, DAMNDAMNDAMNDAMNDAMN!

Me gusta.

i'm laughing my ass off and i have a boner? not sure if want also this emoticon seems oddly apt:)

Holy gravy!  The sensual and sexual are so...

Continue your work...CONTINUE IT NOW!

Ignore my randomness, it's a problem that the fourth wall police have been looking into.

By the way, you now have an empty box of crackers and a missing sock. Why? Because, the fourth wall cannot stop me from taking all you socks. Muahahahaha!

Never thought I'd enjoy a dildo clopfic. Nice job. I really liked how tender you had them get with each other, and I enjoyed the visuals and audible effects while they were going at it. I'm going to be taking notes on stuff like that for future stories.

One thing that kind of bugged me though were a few word choices. Things like "sexily". Maybe it's me, but that sounds kind of like you couldn't think of a word, so you had to put that there. Kind of makes me cringe if I read it out loud.

Otherwise very good. 4/5.

  First off, I'm one sick pony, so i actually prefer pony porn by far over that sapien ugliness.

  I loved the one to one attention you give these couples, and the willingness of each to forgo their own selfish desire to bring pleasure to the other was inspireringly generous writing.  The pace  was not rushed and had a solid natural feel that is generally lacking in the wham- bam 1000 word horse race to the finish line that many clopfics inflict upon us.

   Once again you have worked magic and don't forget a bit of m/m to make us all squirm a bit too. Just throw in the nuzzling, kissing, and forplay, and you may even get some converts. Hey I warned you I'm sick Solid writing storm!  TY.

SWEET MOTHER OF DISCORD

Me Gusta. Me Gusta Mucho.

AND A CLOPFIC MADE ME D'AWW!

first i was like then i was like and finaly im like

YOU SICK FREAK! HOW DARE YOU MAKE TWO PONIES HAVE SEX LIKE THIS!? THIS IS DISGRACEFUL!!!

...

...

...

*zip*

that was so good I almost clopped to it with my mom in the room!

let's see if I can get my girlfriend to say yes to a little "midnight fun"

>>295277295277 that is a cute pic of Fluttershy and personally I would like to see her in here

>>296227296227 you sir you are everywhere just like me only i see you and you no see me i watches you oh and to comment on the fic well done i wish i had more to say but i am "tender" and "empty" at the moment both physically and mentally so i will comment on what i think later for now i must zzzzzzzzzz

>>305140305140

I think that was supposed to be creepy, but I'm not quite sure.

>>305371305371 no it wasn't it was a compliment and i wanted to tell you that i have read some of your posts and i respect your opinions on a lot of these fan fics and this was used to get your attention Swag

Oh sweet lord. An intense clop fic with an adorable/ comedic ending.

You, sir, are a wizard and a sir.

So...this is like the Combinatorics Project, but with clop?

Not bad.  Not bad at all.

>>308758308758

Haha. Noooot quite, but sounds good to me, anyway!

Three things stand out for me.

One, and most importantly, I like the premise. No angst or ooc... ness, just friends having fun with each other. Sex, yeah, but t's still kinda heartwarming. (I like clop, but too much of the good clop is brimming with angst and the cast turning on each other.) Seeing the sexual hijinks expand to include the others, especially Pinkie (I imagine she'd LOVE these new games) would be great, so looking forward to that.

Two, they were both very in character, which is cool. Hope to see more of Twiligh in particular.

Three, I noticed the Spike at Rarity's for the night line. A throwaway line or foreshadowing?

>>311195311195

That was a throwaway line, really. It was an excuse for Spike to not be there interrupting things. I could conceivably do something involving Spike in the future, buuut I'm sure Equestria After Dark considers him underage, so I'd have to age him up.

Thanks for your compliments. :)

The Plot Device...I see what u did there

Also, I have to give you a slightly shamefaced me gusta...

You had me all the way up to the end. I thought this was kinda sweet, but it turns out that they're not even in a real relationship. I guess the title should of read the name of these stories, but I was linked here and didn't know.

>>315427315427

Yeah, I'm not sure how much outright shipping I'm going to be putting into these one-shots. It'll probably happen a few times. I have an idea or two that involves actual romance, and someone could certainly give me a romantic request worth writing about. Otherwise, I want to stick to the "friends with benefits" mantra as much as I can.

TwiDash is my OTP so it kind of hurt me inside not to actually put them romantically together, buuuut~ I'd like to save that kind of stuff for bigger projects. We'll see what happens. Also, I'd like to imagine they're pretty close to that sort of thing anyway, even if the story doesn't outright imply it.

>>315792315792

Welll... why not make them all romantically attracted to each other? I mean, pretty much every one of them has ship tease with the other 5 (and sometimes Spike). So a mutual, 6 way attraction might not be that weird.

Dude you commented on like every story that im tracking, i almost feel like i know you so yeah im def. going to read no

>>323914323914

Note that this story isn't just going to involve Mane 6! I could use pretty much any character I want, or is requested to me. The theme is also "friends with benefits," so actual romance may not come into the one-shots very much. Depends on what I feel like writing, whether my own ideas or a reqest given to me.

We'll see what happens! Ultimately, we're all in it for the clop. :3

>>325695325695 In that case, I think I'll use the idea for a more... romantic based fic. Sorry I couldnt help more. Still looking forward to the next chapter. (Heres hoping for Derpy/ Fluttershy)

great as always

   Wow...that was...um...a good clopfic....  *zip*

THAT had to be among the best clopfics I've read, rightnupbthere with a few Others, EXCELLENT!

I will admit that the slight shipping you applied really gives it an extra something.

Also loving the length of the story itself, it doesent have that rushed feeling that often plagues other clopfics.

How do we make requests?

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>>337610337610

There's a thread in my Clopfics group where requests can be posted. Check the description of the story for a quick link. :)

Great as always Scy. I followed a lot of your Pokemon smut on your site, and espescially loved your Friends to Mates series as well as a few others. Can't wait to see what you do with this story. Tracked

Hey man y u no write moar?

Its been like 3 weeks and still no new chapters?

I have a need to read!

>>379958379958

CRY MORE

Actually I'm working on My First Party next. Clopfics will come later~!

"The shop I found in Canterlot was called The Crop. It was... a rather interesting place," she remarked.

YAY REFERENCES!!!

Not bad. Straight porn with a bit or romantic characterization. Liked the magic use, both instances. Also likes the level of descriptiveness. Kept it very clear what was going on without becoming morbidly detailed.

Could have used a bit of wing interaction. Not as an erogenous zone, I consider that contrived and silly, but it seemed like they were not mentioned at all. They are quite good for embracing, fanning a cool breeze up a sweaty unicorn's neck and adding a bit of propulsion to thrusting.

One thing I would mention is, while creative license abounds, I've always seen  "The Plot Device" depicted in art as a large metallic anal strapon. Of course that's for intimidation factor since penile shaped toys are not ideal for anal stimulation, so I actually prefer this version.

One other correction is that the medial ring is not approximately 1/2 way down the shaft, but rather about 1/3 from the base.

>>542820542820

You may be talking about the "Plot Device" that my friend Severus drew a few times. That's exactly the inspiration for the toy in this fic. I don't think it was strictly meant to be anal-only or anything, it was just meant to be a big strap-on. It just so happens the only pony he drew actually using it was Twilight, and she was taking it anally.

>>543536543536

True none of the other pics in that series had it being used, but "Plot" is slang for rump/ass, and "plot hole" is slang for tail/ass hole, not candyvag. So I assumed it was just a super intimidating butt buster.

>>544391544391

Yeah, I don't think his definition of "Plot" is that specific, so. ;P  It's not anal-only, otherwise I think it would look different.

>>544422544422

All good.

Nice work. How you managed 8900 words in a one-shot clopfic amazes me...glad to say that even this couldn't drive me to be a furry. I am still pure brony! in my book, becoming a furry from a clopfic automatically un-bronytizes you. No pony furries are bronies in my eyes

>>584983584983

I find that comment insulting! I've been a furry for a decade now and I don't think it makes me any less of a brony. Why are you even waxing science about furries in the comment anyway? XD

>>585867585867 You misunderstood. Furries are ok, i guess, but i they go furry on a MLP fanfic, they answer to ME!

I did really overreact though. sorry if I insulted you.

I wanna be into this for the sex, but I'm still not quite there. I find these stories more cute and funny than sexy.

I liked your writing. You only overused a couple of words and I felt like you dealt with spacial ques very well. You also built up the anticipation quite dashingly. I knew what was in the box, but I was still like "what's in the box? what's in the box? what's in the box?"

I felt kind of sorry for Dashie the whole way through, except she finally seemed satisfied when they snuggled together afterwords, so it worked out.

Another thumbs up, though I dare say you've already gotten a few.

I'd fave this, but I don't want friends or family noticing I'm into this stuff if they happen to use my comp.

Wow.

I must say, I've never read any serious clopfics until now, but I sure do love this, I shall definitely be following you all the way on this one, you are a brilliant writer!

Not once before in my life have my emotions been so furiously manipulated, one minute I'm thinking that the situation is 100% awkward and I'm saying to myself, 'what have you done Scy? You've dug yourself a real deep hole this time...' then you bring the whole thing right back and leave me sitting in the dust! How do you write so gewd?!

Keep it up bro! RF.

>>586539586539

That comment hurt my feelings...

I've seen enough clop to know the good from the bad, and THIS is VERY good clop. Detailed and arousing, plus, I just loved the characterization. Good job.

This outstanding fic is the first clopfic I read; hell, it's the first erotic fiction I ever read (unless you count Breaking Dawn).  It's too sexy not to ask to continue it! Ple-e-e-eaasseee

This story is unlike any other TwiDash-Story  I've read . (and I ´ve read allmost all of them. So I know what I´m talking about.)

But thats a nice change. I coudn´t say what exaktly is diffrent, but it is.

Whatever. It´s a great Story