"O brave new world, That has such people in't".

This is my first time writing outside of academics, so go easy on me, my goal here is simply to write a little story with a bit of romance and humor to it.

Chapters (7)

Prologue · 28th Nov 2013 · 632 words
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1 · 28th Nov 2013 · 1,639 words
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2 · 28th Nov 2013 · 3,458 words
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3 · 30th Nov 2013 · 3,900 words
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4 · 24th Dec 2013 · 2,725 words
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5 · 24th Dec 2013 · 2,272 words
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6 · 25th Dec 2013 · 1,001 words
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Initiate Brony

Initiate Brony #1 · Nov 28th, 2013 · · · 2 ·

Really? Excellent, some feedback besides a like or dislike is always appreciated.

TheDeathFaze

TheDeathFaze #2 · Nov 28th, 2013 · · · 2 ·

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Initiate Brony

Initiate Brony #3 · Nov 28th, 2013 · · · 2 ·

Is the clapping angry or respect? If angry, why? If respect and congrats then thanks a lot--honestly this gives me some courage to continue writing.

Sabban

Sabban #4 · Nov 30th, 2013 · · · 3 ·

This is the tale of a young college student being transported to Equestria for no reason at all

N-no. No. N-ooo... no. Noo.

Initiate Brony

Initiate Brony #5 · Nov 30th, 2013 · · · 3 ·

This is the tale of a young college student being transported to Equestria for no reason at all
N-no. No. N-ooo... no. Noo.

I can understand that bit being less than desirable. This was a bit of an impulse write so I skimped on the details a bit there. If I write another story I'll be sure to maybe flesh things out a bit and not use such an utter cliche.

And perhaps I won't use the word "bit" so damn often.

Blossomfalll

Blossomfalll #6 · Dec 24th, 2013 · · · 4 ·

I don't remember reading this story but I got it in my favourites with read chapters so I thought I'd remember. So lost, I really need to re-read this.

Initiate Brony

Initiate Brony #7 · Dec 24th, 2013 · · · 4 ·

3676650 Not sure if I should be sad that you forgot or happy that you are going to reread it.

Blossomfalll

Blossomfalll #8 · Dec 30th, 2013 · · · 6 ·

3676652 Well I read about ten different new stories every time I log on and don't stop till I get to the last chapter, so don't be sad, I'm sure I've forgotten many more. I'm very forgetful considering I read in the middle of the night.