Scootaloo considers herself many things: awesome, cool, President of the Rainbow Dash Fan-club... but she never imagined she'd ever call herself... in love?
She soon finds herself struggling with this completely new, alien feeling. What makes it even more difficult is the recipient of this love—her best friend.
How will Scootaloo cope with these new feelings and what will her friends and family think?
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My entry to the Scootabelle Writing Contest 1
Huge thanks to Cerulean Voice for his awesome work as an editor!
Massive thanks to Pegasister Teagan for the awesome cover art!
Big thanks to my pal DeepShift for Pre-reading.
Chapters (4)
I love this paring, and I liked the first chapter. Can't wait until the next one
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Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the watch!
I knew you could do it. I look forward to reading this upon completion.
Good luck, friend.
They would be a cute couple
Can't wait for more.
3554913 The story should be finished soon, considering I have a deadline.
I am working my arse off to get this done.
Damn man, this was pretty great! I like how you portray the CMC, it's well done and close to the show. I'd like to point out a small mistake here
Shouldn't that be Scootaloo? Anyways, aside from that no mistakes I can see and it was really enjoyable. Can't wait to see where you take this!
~DeepShift
3558396 Thanks, that means a lot to me.
3559641 Not a problem buddy.
~DeepShift
3559659 I was kind of self conscious about this story, I have never done romance before. I only really do sad and dark. But I am proud of this story.
BTW, I am stuck too. I have no idea what I am going to do with this.
3559836 Do what I do: Wing it. Seriously, just sit down with a half-assed idea of what should happen adn write. Works wonders.
~DeepShift
3559862 I usually do, but it comes out like crap.
My other story Sheamus In Equestria, I scraped like, 4 times before publishing.
I tried doing this story with a new style, but it won't work out.
Whatever, I will just write some bad chapter and scrap it 6 times before I get it right.
3559917 xD Don't scrap it, write it, leave it a day, then go over it making all the necessary fixes and changes.
~DeepShift
3559926 Lol, I am just gonna play Dota for a while and try to think of something. I know what I want to do, I just need a way of approaching it. I was think occasional diary entries for Scoots, but it seems cheesy to me.
3559987 Eh, maybe. But I feel like 'Diary' entries would eb more in Sweetie Belle's ballpark. Perhaps a journal instead? I know the difference is marginal at best but still.
~DeepShift
3600383
Nice chapter man, I liked it
~DeepShift
3613992 Thanks.
3613994 Hello Slowbro95 hear to give anther story rating. This story is good, but the chapters are short. As you know I love long story's. But that's not the reason I like it.
Above all of the story genders romance has to be my #1.
Chapter 1: I like how Scootaloo has a crash on Sweetie Belle before Chapter 2. It had some problems with timing and placement. Scootaloo Is a bit out of charter I don't think she would say
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Chapter 2: ......Okay I have a question. How did they start the fire?.... Now the timing is good on this one had no problem with it.
The song, I loved it! It is the first time hearing it and it fit well for the story. Scootaloo isn't out of charter, you can change over the years.
Chapter 3: No one loves school.... Will except Twilight.
Scootaloo having trouble with her feelings well everyone dues at some point. But her dad will be a challenge to right and make it harder for him to accept his daughter's sexuality.
Now my rating:(
4 Out Of 5 Happy Pinkies)
Shined,
Slowbro95
Ps: cheap righting.
3672142 Yay!
I love the development of this story
Now excuse me while I say the popular line: I WANT MOAR!!!!
3706223 You shall receive.
This still being written?
4217103 yeah, I only write when I feel like it.
4221256 yay
Ermagerd its awesome! I WANT MOAR
plz? 
When I first read this, I laughed at Scootaloo's reaction. I thought "now, that's going a bit far, isn't it?" Then, I listened, for the first time to the actual song...
...
Scootaloo! Why isn't the treehouse flooded in your tears of pure beauty! You aren't revelling in the beauty enough!!!!
You are NOT cutting this off now! I won't let you! You fix this Celestia-darn it!!
5679357 Computer problems. Only have an IPad right now. Expect writing soon. :)
5679666 I will expect it soon. I will hunt you down if you don't.
But in all seriousness I am loving this story. I am new to the ScootaBelle shipping, so every one of its stories seems great to me, but I can tell this one will remain in my mind forever. Good Luck with finishing this, because I never want it to end.
5680873 I'm really happy you think so highly of my writing! :D
5679666 *twitch* *twitch*
Ten weeks have passed since the last progress update... still no sign of progression.
Food supplies are running low, and many have been lost to the void of the hiatus.
We fear the worst.
5957037 No computer, no inspiration. I'm sorry but I may have to put this story on... Hiatus. :(
5957107 ALERT, ALERT, Hiatus in progress!
"GRAB THE WEAPONS MEN, THIS IS A HARD BATTLE!!"
*explosions*
WHERE IS OUR GOD NOW?!?!?!?!
5957944 I am currently working on a new project. It's been in the works for almost a year. After it is released I may go back to this. I am getting a new computer soon so I'll be able to write more if it makes you feel any better. :)
5959198 Oll Korrect. I'm just yanking your chain man, it's all good! I do very much hope to see this story back in the works, but life, I understand.
Stupid life, doesn't want ponies...
we need all the ponies...
5959198
Aww Man, what a lovely story would this be... Maybe if it was finished :/
First time I read your story and this could be a masterpiece.
I'm Really looking forward to see this finished, or at least continued. When you're going to continue the story? :(
P s.: sorry for my bad english, I'm hungarian but I try to do my best
6354401 Sorry for the late reply.
It's highly unlikely I'll complete or continue this story, or any other story for multiple reasons.
1. I only have a tablet, I'm not even going to bother trying to write without a proper keyboard.
2. My interest for the show is dwindling. I don't think I've watched a season 5 episode yet.
3. Any editors, friends, or really anybody I know in this fandom is completely out of touch with me, considering I've been gone for almost a year.
I actually tried to get in contact with one of my former friends and editors, but I don't think he is too fond of me. I did leave for months at at a time without notice during a project.
If I do actually get into this stuff again, I'll be writing a blog. But part of the reason I loved this fandom so much was because of the people, and I don't know anyone anymore lol.
6404104
Well I Really hope you will someday finish this story because it would be so awful letting this story leave unfinished.
Also I understand you, but if you could somehow finish this story, that would be the best
Deep in the story and it was being left at the 'worst' part where the reader thinks it's finished and no chance that it will get better. I really hope you will someday finish this :(
6404435 i think I'll come back to writing, but if I do it won't be a for a while. I'm currently living with another family as a billet for junior hockey, so I have no job. I get about 300 dollars a month for food, which is always gone. On that I can't exactly get a new computer.
Once I do get a new laptop/computer I'll try again, and this story is high on my list for my return. :)