After Rarity receives a letter leading to a month long-due business trip in Canterlot, the fashionista says her goodbyes to family and friends as she packs for departure. However there is one friend she just can't seem to get hold of and when she finally does the clock's been ticking and Rarity is forced to cut her visit at Fluttershy short.
Little does she know that Fluttershy isn't planning on having Rarity leave anytime soon...
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it was ok but a little out of character for fluttershy
I think you ought to continue it.
hawt
I got to agree with recca pony fluttershy was out of character, however its your story and you can make the characteristics of anypony any way you like.
why are so many people not likeing this that what I just read was awsome it deserves to be continued yes you could make the argument that it was predictible besides the letter part and if you disliked it because it was desterbing and Flutters was out of character that is how most dark stories should be so author Iam begging you continue this
Even though Fluttershy was OOC in this fic, this still was not bad. Nicely dark, but I did see some errors where there could be improvement. Chiefly grammatical, but also the part with the inhibitor ring. Rarity would have noticed the blockage of her magic immediateluy when she could no longer use her magic to drink her tea.
Sequal please?
That was really good i like it on my behalf
I'd really like to see where this goes from here.
I love the premise, and I think I love you.
They were childhood friends?
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Of course! Fluttershy has been stalking Rarity since childhood, letting her obsession formulate enough to make her snap and develop evil plots of kidnaps and sexual pet-play dominance scenarios.
LESBO PONIES
I think it is a great fic and would probably not be that much out of character, you know the dark side of flutters^^
and I actually read it again after a while ;-D
5302481 I think she was too nervous to use her magic^^
anyways, the story is great in my oppinion
and nothing is really out of character here, actually I swould think that it is a plausible version of that ship since flutters really is shy^^
you can't refer to the show about that stuff since the show can't show every aspect of the characters since it is manely for children, so what they do in their "privat" time is something the fan's can decide and make up :-)
5301212 How is this awful its a dark story what did you expect to be all sunshine and rainbow dashes,
Also not directed to the guy I just replied to in this comment
5302471(sorry don't know how to move it I know stupid) but I did not mean to say that being out of character is a good thing what I meant is kind of what this comment says
5429617 that we don't know what the characters do off screen and that's the thing the writers gave us to imagine what do they do
P.S how did my comment get 2 dislikes come on people just smile
also wares are sequal I will do anything for this to continue.
Oh s**t what did I just say
5465908 I know that the characters probably behave differently "off screen"
But I thing that flutters would actually do something like that, I mean at least the part with the musclerelaxers, the part with kissing rarity is just an improvement^^
many people think that they have to stay in their role they play in the story, but honestly, do you know everything about your neighbour?
probably not, every being has more than just one personality, we just show only one of each to the puplic....
5466630 that makes sense but to me its just people not using their full imagination but that's me
5468078 I am someone who has no imagination at all, so you can't really blame me for not using something I don't have^^'
But you got a point there thou...
5469019 wow sorry for responding this late by wow I have a point no way I never have one of those
Very disturbing, but I like it anyway. Fluttershy is OOC but I guess this is how she might behave if she totally snapped.
Yandere fluttershy is so underused great story btw
Rereading this, it's actually very hot. Fluttershy's dialogue and the sensual description of the drug's effects with Fluttershy's rapist cuddles...
I don't know why, but for some reason this song popped into my head once things went south:
That was a good story.