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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Zecora rarely gets visitors to her hut, but when Rainbow Dash surprises her with a visit, Rainbow ends up finding herself in a strange situation.

Written for the November Crack Ships Inc prompt contest!

Also, this was pretty much the ONLY picture I could find of Dash and Zecora together.

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Eh, it was simple, and little bit shallow, but it was alright, I guess.

A Really cool Story.

But I think it would be funnier when Rainbow had to be a Zebra for a bit longer. Maybe must wait for a flower to grow or something like that and learning more about Zeccora and Zebra in general.

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I actually did want to have a longer version with Rainbow being stuck like that longer, but I had a terrible case of writer's block for a while, and then had to finish this before the deadline. I might write an alternate version if I find the time that makes it last longer.

That was really nice, good concept but a bit short. Maybe a follow up is in order?:duck:

For some reason, this made me start thinking about Rainbow's ancestry. What if she's part zebra, and that somehow contributed to her stripy mane and tail?

I kinda was expecting the antidote would only give her wings back and she remain part zebra :rainbowlaugh:

Cute but it felt really rushed in spots :twilightsheepish:

Its a nice story, it did entertain me. It isn't perfect, but you did your job as a writer, and you succeded. Now suffer my horrible grammar and me trying to sound smart and more inteligent then I am

Is the picture from an episode? I can't tell.

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