"People are lonely because they build walls instead of bridges."
Trixie does not want help - She does not need help! ...Right?
Wrote this on an influx of emotions. It's short and simple, and was a pretty quick write, so sorry if it's not too good.
Still, I was listening to some music when I found that quote. Me, being the emotional sponge I am, couldn't resist.
So enjoy!
Oh, and if there were the off chance that another author found this interesting enough to want to continue it, I'd be fine with that. Just contact me first if you're interested.
Art By: pyrestriker
Chapters (2)
Whoa-whoa-whoa! Paragraphs are jumping like a Hitler on his tank on a rocky road! Gaps are too large and it is kinda hard to read.
As for story: i can't say much about the story because Stalin is not amused with that kind of stories. All Stalin can say is it paced fine, and grammar is fine too. Stalin recommends to change writing style (to make gaps smaller). This may bring more harmony in overall impression.
short, sweet and beautiful. I love it!
I don't understand why this fic doesn't have more
attention! This was great!
It was emotional and well written, for being so short,
it makes up in its impact.
I may or may not have sniffled a bit...
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
Nice enough with no problems that I can recall.
YES! More Twixie!
You sir have done a fine job indeed.
wow....i really like this writing style!
306127 I see what you mean. Thank you for the criticism. Also, thank you for the writing complement! Even if this story wasn't to your tastes, I still appreciate the time you took to read it and the feedback you gave.
306188 Thank you! I'm glad to see I've made the impact I had hoped to. And thank you for the complement, it means a lot to me
309341
Always welcome.
306133 Thanks! I appreciate it!
my day has been made.
306638 Thank you good sir
309014 Awesome! Thank you for the complement!
You have all made my day. Thank you again
Ah, very nice here. Trixie bad... Twilight's right. Compared to other antagonists, Trixie was practically a paladin. Heck, I don't even consider her in that category myself.
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was really cute and very well written!! i luv u
jk, but seriously, great story!
This...is Beautiful... I love the remorse, i can feel it emanating from the screen
(i used tears to exclaim happiness as well)
Yes, the author notes are late. Too bad
Just re-read because i was bored.
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
Dood, really, you have three real options here.
1) go for it and get a page in for every antagonist out there.
2) carry on and make Trixie your protagonist.
3) don't write anything and lose your mind. And then lose it again. Can you do that? Can you lose your mind twice?
418645 There's a chance I may do (2) but I'm not sure. I'm still mulling it over
Just reread it again.
Still hoping for a sequel
Still a good read.