• Member Since 9th Mar, 2012
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Owlor


Swedish guy with too much imagination. Draws comics as a hobby and writes as a diversion.

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By chance, Fluttershy discovers a series of strange leaves in the Everfree Forest. She, together with Twilight, tries to get to the bottom of where the leaves come from and what they might mean, and they stumble across a mystery centered around Sugarcube Corner. A little bit of ponies, a little bit of Lovecraft, sprinkled with a spoonful of sugar and frosting.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

Having quotes at the top is just gloriously pretentious, thouh I can't help it, I just love pretentious quotes.

Why is there so many Dark stories? Stalin is not amused! Every second story is Adventure/dark...

About this story:
Stalin is amused by chapter's names. It helps to build up the atmosphere.
Wall of text, expicially at the beginning. Slightly different to read. You need a gaps between some paragraphs.
Skittles, eh?
Story is paced well. Grammars are great. Overall, interesting. It may be Stalin's only opinion, but all dark stories are kinda... Simmiliar. That's why Stalin is not amused. But do not worry, Stalin is not a god and his opinion means something only for his Empire of Evil. Keep the good work.

:moustache:Stalin commands to dance!

305993

If it makes you feel better, the next story I'm writing is not a dark story. I think the best way I can describe it is that dark MLP fiction is kind of like a pun, you KNOW that the joke has been made before, but it doesn't matter, you just have to say it.

There aint no party like a communist party cus a communist party don't stop!

305993 ?!!?!!?

Anywayz, i love this story so far!
cant wait to read the next chapters :pinkiehappy:

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