The story of a troubled writer and thief named Raven Quill who just moved into Ponyville with his drunkard mother. He supports himself with the money he makes by selling stolen good. He soon after finds himself growing emotional ties towards another pony which will prove to be the worst mistake he ever makes.
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Solid start, I like it! Tracking
Thief!~
Tracked and thumbs up. :D
Well start for the first chapter I'm going to track this.
Story is paced well. Grammars are good. Start is solid. What else to say? Nothing much to criticize, but nothing much to impress on either. Only advice Stalin can give you is to keep writing. Nice job!
Amazing. I really like the story so far. Keep up the awesome work
"Scootaloo is also the younger sister of Cheerilee in Generation 3." As quoted by http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Scootaloo
"In the Core 7 serials, she is the older sister of Scootaloo and her main personality trait is intelligence." As quoted by http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Cheerilee
Sorry to be a downer, just wanted to point that out mate, also, nice story, tracked.
The pony is a spy
- A brony on TF2
I just had to that when the time came. Anyway great way to start of of a story. TRACKED!!!!!!!!!!!fauishf;aivlaejivds*ERROR*
Awesome chapter
I demand MOAR! 
Theft *shifty eyes*
334292 Thank you!
I'm kind of focusing on my other fic more right now, bit I'm considering writing Chapter Three on this one tonight. We shall see how I feel!
334472 The reason I just got off of probation last week! True story
334494 ha, love it when people write fanfics based off their life experience. What's it like being a thief? How did you got caught?
334499 It's so much fun being a thief. The spikes coming out of Raven's hooves were actually from something I made haha. I found this plate thing with sharp spikes sticking out of it at Home Depot. It was about the size of a palm so i stole two I stabbed them through my gloves and it helped me climb up trees like in the story. I got caught because I was stupid one time. Thought there was no one there. There was haha
334539 haha =), I'm enjoying your fanfic so far! Keep up the good work, and don't get caught now.
Getting caught = you unable to write next chapter. =P
Good day!
-Morfonious
EDIT: I just realized that I feel bad for Cherilee now because that stolen ring from that jewelry box was unicorn ring yes? It means two things, its priceless family heirloom OR Cherilee had a unicorn husband that either left her or died (I wager died, after all if he just left like that she would probably threw the ring away)
Hope it ends up back in her hooves at some point D:
Good chapter
however there are a few grammar mistakes and typos, I suggest you re-read it and edit where it's necessary. Also, the part about the Prince called AJ had me confused, as we all know AJ usually stands for Applejack. 
340738 Sorry about the typos and stuff. It was 1 in the morning last night when I re-read. Usually I'd wait until morning to re read it or have my editor read through it.
And about the AJ thing. It was a reference to my friend AJ. Also known as Prince Whateverer. He makes brony music. He's a real good friend of mine so I thought I'd reference him just for fun. Idk if you've heard him. His music is kick ass so I'll post a link. PrinceWhateverer - Promises He's insane. He stays up till like 3 every night working on his music.
341016 S'alright. Thanks for the link
Read the other chapters and I LOVE THEM! I can't wait for the next chapter! It's already good and it's only the 3rd chapter
So please keep posting
So cute heh, let's see what happens next!
Damn it Raven! Rule #1: Dont get involved with other ponies.
Oh who am i kidding. Im forever alone and this just reminds me of that.
Good chapter anyway
oh god that ending
Don't die scoots I dun want you to die
Oh shit what happened to scoots?
So thats what happened Scoots.
Also, hooray for love!
good story, but it updates so slow....
Update please? :D