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  • E A Dash of Colour

    It's Spike's last night before the rest of his life begins and he's going to spend it alone...
    1,874 words · 2,392 views  ·  50  ·  2
  • T Dawn

    It's been ten years since Celestia's disappearance, and Luna's set on getting her back.
    8,185 words · 619 views  ·  33  ·  1 · gore
  • T A Final Dialogue With Celestia

    All pass beyond eventually, alicorns not excepting. When Celestia's time draws close, the last talk she can give will be Twilight's greatest blessing.
    1,492 words · 320 views  ·  18  ·  0
  • E To Be An Apple

    There have always been Apples living in Sweet Apple Acres. But what happens when it's time to leave
    5,019 words · 3,598 views  ·  66  ·  7
  • E A Dialogue with Celestia

    Cadence is maturing fast, and it falls upon Celestia to have the 'talk' with her...
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  • E Once upon a Ponyville...

    Once upon a Ponyville...
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  • T The Chronicling of The Fall

    The founding of Equestria was a bloody business, but it was it always leading to the fall of Luna?
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  • T To Know The End

    Can you ever really know the end without knowing the beginning?
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Blog Posts29

  • 61w, 1d
    A Specter Lurking From His Grave

    So, it appears I'm not dead. And it also appears I posted a new story. Hmm...


    Here we have a sort-of-sequel to A Dialogue with Celestia filled with copious amounts of pretentiousness and pseudophilosophy.

    I just hope someone enjoys it.

    Yours faithfully,

    - Timefly

    0 comments · 72 views
  • 74w, 6d


    3rd result. Why?

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  • 95w, 3d
    Merry Christmas.

    3 comments · 96 views
  • 97w, 1d
    Hey ho...

    I need some assistance. If you, yes you dear reader, would read the following short piece (1200 words) and tell me if you find it funny or not, that would be fab. The piece is what is supposed to be the beginning of a novel I'm trying to write, and I'm currently trying to gauge the way in which to write it. (Other criticism is also welcomed.)


    Also, more pony fiction soon.

    0 comments · 123 views
  • 108w, 4d
    State of the Union

    First off, I'm sorry, this post is going to be more useless drama, something the internet doesn't really need. So, if you fancy here's the TL;DR... I'm taking a break from writing.

    Now, this break isn't going to be a useless break, during this break I'm going to write a number of stories and I'm going to rework some of my all ready existing works. This is a break only in the sense that I shall be publishing no new stories for a few weeks, nor updating 'Dawn'.

    I think it's pretty clear after 'Colour' that my writing's not really up to scratch, so I'm going to improve it. Furthermore, I start university for the first time this week, so I'm going to be rather busy.

    Now, if you're reading this, and you care, I'm sorry.

    And that's about all.

    Good day.

    4 comments · 94 views
  • ...

Under the quiet of night, there's nowhere for Luna to hide from the things which haunt her.

Cover art: Luna by Equestria-Prevails.

Special thanks to Cornflak, someone who looks beyond the words.

First Published
8th Mar 2012
Last Modified
8th Mar 2012
#1 · 137w, 1d ago · · ·

Very well done, as usual!

That welcoming ceremony scene and the bit where Luna finally breaks down really hit me hard. It was a relief to finally understand all that was troubling her. The ending was a nice touch as well. It didn't leave the reader hanging, but it still left future events open to interpretation.

I was very impressed. :eeyup:

#2 · 137w, 1d ago · · ·

That was really good! I loved the language in the beginning; it really set the scene. I hope this gets into the most popular stories list.

#3 · 135w, 4d ago · · ·

Very, very nice story...Favourited.

Though you spelled "luscious" wrong. :derpytongue2:

#5 · 135w, 3d ago · · ·

Very impressive prose here. Vivid, expressive and emotive. I would also congratulate you on your use of scene jumps. These were short, yet smooth and efficient, ensuring that the maximum amount of information and impact was delivered before moving on.

The story was short, but enjoyable. Keep up the great work!

#6 · 135w, 3d ago · · ·

Very impressive prose here. Vivid, expressive and emotive. I would also congratulate you on your use of scene jumps. These were short, yet smooth and efficient, ensuring that the maximum amount of information and impact was delivered before moving on.

The story was short, and while not particularly lingering, enjoyable. Keep up the great work!

#7 · 134w, 4d ago · · ·

A more serious and somehow more probable outcome of the sister's reunion, than just "let's forget everything and love each other" depicted in the show.

Congratulations, truly a great read.

#8 · 123w, 1d ago · · ·

i randomly stumbled upon this story

It's really great. your writing is clean and clear- descriptive without being too wordy. I envy you, truly.

you should keep writing!

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#10 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Really a great story, that doesn't go the understandably easier way of the child's show, yet it doesn't go the just as easy way of just flip-flopping the perspective and making Luna an innocent victim that never did anything wrong (most popular among fanfic writers). Instead it deals seriously with guilt and regret and atonement, with that horrible feeling of "being trash", of knowing you have done something wrong and feeling you can never repair your mistake, of getting angry when those you feel you have wronged trying to apologize to you. It touches me deeply and is a mature piece of writing on a complex subject that rarely gets this fine treatment.


#11 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·


I'm glad that you got something from it. What more can I ask for? :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the feedback.

#12 · 80w, 2d ago · · ·

began watching the pegasii

One 'i' would be sufficient.

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