Ever since the Exiled Ex-queen of the Changelings moved in, Zecora finds herself giving more and more advice to help Chrysalis fit in.
For the November Crack Ship contest.
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Ha, so that's where Chrysalis went to...
Excellent short fic. :)
The first time writing Zecora is this, so my rhyming may seem like piss.
But if I continue using her persona, it hopefully will get better... Or I owe ya.
Nifty.
Zecora's not easy to write... one must either rhyme everything or find a reason for her not to do it. Considering she rhymes in every episode she's in, it would be difficult to come up with an excuse for her to speak like everypony else.
Nice connection between Zecora and Chrysalis. The reference to "Bridle Gossip" was a nice way to build empathy between the two.
Not bad. There's a few errors here and there, one that I remember in particular was 'hid' should be 'hide'. Other than that, very good.
I liked the way you went into those pseudo-love emotions and how they affect changelings. I always thought of lust being the junk food allegory, myself. 
Bravo to you for writing Zecora. Always a challenge.
3504820 The work behind Zecora is quite the task for anyone, but it can be done. I congratulate you for such a feat, one so admired that not even I can beat.
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I think that the love equivalent to candy is the Love Poison or other shmoopy-doopy sweetie-weetie couples.
Tolerance is like eating cardboard.
Zecora seems like she would be hard to write for.
Anyway, I don't think I could say anything that anyone else hasn't already said, so I'd like to say this was a short and sweet little one-shot, giving hope to everyone's favorite insect-pony hybrid. The outcasts have to stick together, after all.
3506719 So it's high in fiber?
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And rough, tasteless and not particularly enjoyable.
But until that day comes, you are always welcome in my hut.”
Chrysalis stared at the zebra is shock.
“…Thank you.” She smiled, “….Wait, that last one wasn’t a rhyme.”
Zecora coyly smiled back, “My thoughts were cut.”
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That was part of the joke.
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I figured as much.
Cute. I like Zecora's sass. But I did find a few tiny errors here and there.
...There's no turning back...
Aww, that was cute. And full of feels near the end. Zecora is awesome and I'm glad Chryssie had a friend.
Cya
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