Princess Celestia, the proud ruler of Equestria, admired by thousands as the beautiful Princess of the Sun. But behind her majestic looks is a deep ocean of sorrow and regret. She remembers that day. The day the darkness within her sister begun
Princess Celestia, the proud ruler of Equestria, admired by thousands as the beautiful Princess of the Sun. But behind her majestic looks is a deep ocean of sorrow and regret. She remembers that day. The day the darkness within her sister begun
Oooh, very nicely done! The chapters are short and concise, but something about that, not to mention your writing style itself, reminds me strongly of James Patterson! I like this little read.
This was great! I love how you worded it out! Well-done!
Thank you so much! I'm still planning out a sequel but I hope you'll read that to.
Goodnight Luna
Goodnight Moon
Goodnight Rainbow's
Sonic Boom
(Sorry, with the chapter title, I just had to put that in )
Very nice story
3567087 Thank u.
3569920 You're welcome. Keep up the good work.