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Princess Celestia, the proud ruler of Equestria, admired by thousands as the beautiful Princess of the Sun. But behind her majestic looks is a deep ocean of sorrow and regret. She remembers that day. The day the darkness within her sister begun

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 6 )

Oooh, very nicely done! The chapters are short and concise, but something about that, not to mention your writing style itself, reminds me strongly of James Patterson! I like this little read. :twilightsmile:

This was great! I love how you worded it out! Well-done! :twilightsmile:

Thank you so much! I'm still planning out a sequel but I hope you'll read that to.

Goodnight Luna
Goodnight Moon
Goodnight Rainbow's
Sonic Boom
(Sorry, with the chapter title, I just had to put that in :scootangel:)
Very nice story

3569920 You're welcome. Keep up the good work.

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