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Shinzakura 4125226

Joined March 2012
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    Shinzakura's Stories (4)

    • Polarity: A Tale of Two Sisters
      Prequel to All-American Girl. Derpy Hooves must face a number of sudden important life decisions

      44,445 words · 962 views · 107 likes · 2 dislikes
    • All-American Girl
      A pony raised amongst humans finds out about her birth mother - Rarity.
      251,603 words · 10,461 views · 476 likes · 43 dislikes
    • Be Human: the All-American Girl Sidestories
      Sidestories for the All-American Girl series
      278,244 words · 2,010 views · 182 likes · 13 dislikes
    • The Black Ponies
      Pinkie Pie must recover the Elements of Harmony, using the ability only she posesses: Paries Quartus
      122,676 words · 311 views · 7 likes · 4 dislikes

    Disaster strikes Equestria twice: the realm is invaded by mysterious black ponies, whose goals are unclear and origin unknown.  At the same time, the Elements of Harmony have disappeared, to places far beyond the reach of even Celestia and Luna.  As the nation descends into war, Celestia, Luna, Twilight and the others must fight to prevent their home from being conquered by the enigmatic foes.

    But it is worse for Pinkie Pie: haunted by dreams of the black ponies, she must venture alone to seek out and retrieve the Elements, for only she possesses the mysterious power that can save them all: the magic of Paries Quartus, the ability to transcend the boundaries of space time...that which pony philosophers and poets have referred to as "the Fourth Wall."

    First Published
    8th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    21st Apr 2012

    Comments ( 10 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 63w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Inb4 "Where all tha white ponies at?"

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 63w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Where all tha white ponies at?

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 63w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Of course the black ponies are the invaders.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 63w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>301883

    Well, of course they are.  The Screen Ponies Guild wanted too much pay for the use of plaid ponies, which would have broken the filming budget. :pinkiehappy:

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 62w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Dammit, we REALLY need a luna emoticon!  Loved the creative fix at the end there.  And Pinkie's revelations tied into the story really well too.  :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 62w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>321797

    Thanks!  I felt the best way to show Luna having adjusted to modern times was probably that she'd pick up her sister's impishness.:ajsmug:

    #7 · Chapter 5 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmmmm.   You had the Hierophant refer to Pinkie/Surprise as "Duchess" before Pinkie revealed her title.  While you explained that the Hierophant knew who Pinkie was as soon as she arrived, she was still unaware of the titles and relationship to Celestia, sooo... wassupwitdat?  :twilightoops:

    Oh, and LIGHTSABERS!  Make everything better!

    #8 · Chapter 5 · 61w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>340391

    Thanks for catching that.  Pinkie was originally supposed to use her title as a fake name before I decided to change it to Surprise at the (very) last second; I'm surprised that Word didn't catch all the versions of it (despite using word replace).  I'll get that fixed tonight.

    EDIT: It's now fixed. Thanks again.  

    #9 · Chapter 8 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ah Rainbow Dash you arrogant bitch, you always expect the unexpected!:ajbemused:

    #10 · Chapter 11 · 47w, 14h ago · · ·
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    yes, yes, and YES. Love this story, I read the begging to this chapter and I want this to conutine, so pppppplllllleeeeeeaaaasssseee update this :fluttercry:. Thanks for listening to this comment :pinkiehappy:

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