Source
<

Tundara 765276

Joined February 2012
481 followers

    Tundara's Stories (7)

    • The Longest Night
      On the first night of Luna's banishment Celestia finds two alicorns in a crater.

      6,218 words · 10,924 views · 1,188 likes · 20 dislikes
    • Myths and Birthrights
      Twilight has to deal with new powers and troubles as an Alicorn.
      131,410 words · 10,246 views · 1,056 likes · 27 dislikes
    • Tiger Bloom
      Applebloom finds herself in the Everfree with a guardian that may be more dangerous than the forest.
      26,634 words · 1,629 views · 169 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Velvet Sparkle and the Queen in Stone
      Myths and Birthrights side-story: Velvet Sparkle recounts her younger years in a nation north of Equestria and the events leading up to her becoming the mother of Shining Amour and Twilight Sparkle
      12,255 words · 739 views · 101 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Sins of the Ancients
      161,867 words · 1,331 views · 59 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Before The Fall
      12,635 words · 226 views · 11 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Helena
      2,237 words · 218 views · 7 likes · 2 dislikes
    2

    9
    218


    Dying in a storm, Wind Jammer reflects on his life.

    This story was written in memory of another Helena that disappeared in 2004 in Hurricane Ivan and for all those who sail as a life style or living.  

    First Published
    8th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 9 )

    #1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    :fluttercry::fluttershbad::applecry::raritydespair::raritycry::ajsleepy:

    #2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    decent. :fluttershysad::fluttercry:

    #3 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>300619 >>301650

    Thank you both for your comments. I know it's not stellar writing, but it is a piece that is rather special to me.

    I was one of the last people to speak to the fellow who inspired this story. He was on his way back to his boat after checking out of the country and stopped to speak to me and my mother as we were watching satellite loops of weather systems coming off Africa. After Ivan passed we heard that his family had arrived on the island. He had gone missing and hadn't made his port of destination in South America. From what we knew of his course he'd have been in the middle of Ivan as the storm was increasing from a Cat 3 to Cat 4. I've felt partially guilty for years and have wondered if I could have done or said anything differently that would have made him reconsider leaving when he did.

    #4 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    A ketch with a centerboard? What is this madness? IS the boat based off the likeness I wonder?

    #5 · 28w, 5h ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Ending:

    Right in the feels.

    I like this piece very much. It really got me deep.

    #6 · 28w, 5h ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1738192

    The boat was a real boat that most certainly was a ketch and had a swinging keel. At least, I remember it as a ketch.

    >>1745352

    Thank you. I wrote this mostly as therapy to help grieve. It's very flawed and I know I could do far better now. But having written it right after 5 years of barely typing a word, it's not terrible either. :twilightsmile:

    #7 · 27w, 6d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1745432

    Just seems odd. Ketch's are usually larger and almost exclusively blue water. Bigger ships and ocean going ships tend to avoid unfixed keels. Just seems a might odd to me.

    #8 · 27w, 6d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1748137

    It was odd, I'll grant you.

    #9 · 27w, 6d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    >>1748167

    Still, a good story. To bad there aren't more sailing ponies ::applecry:

    0 14517 44211
    Anonymous comments currently disabled. Please register to make comments