Old and new friends

Derpy has always been wary of how other ponies looked at her. Because of this, when she arrives at Ponyville for the first time, she decides to hide from the other ponies in the Everfree Forest.

But when darkness falls, she finds herself face to face with monsters and strangers.

But, is the stranger really what he seems to be?

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Brenda509

Brenda509 #1 · Nov 11th, 2013 · · ·

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!! Please send chapter 2 to me as soon as you can!

Jazzy Mellows

Jazzy Mellows #2 · Nov 11th, 2013 · · ·

3473004 unfortunately, this story was more of a one-shot. This one chapter is all there really is. However, if I do write more Derpy and Doctor stories, I will let you know.

Chatterjoy

Chatterjoy #3 · Nov 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Well, since I know you like it when I comment I guess I should say something huh?

-breathes deeply- The anthro kinda surprised me but you already knew that because you let me read it on your computer because it was taking so long to be approved but in reality it wasn't taking that long to be approved we just thought it was because we wanted to go to bed well I wanted to go to bed but then I always talk to you before we fall asleep then you always comment on how I'll hate myself in the morning. I don't hate myself because I went to bed late. I hate everything in the morning. I would have thought you would have known this.

Anyway despite the anthro surprising me it was a very cute and sweet story. The anthro was done very nicely without having to be clop. Maybe that is why you have the dislike? Somepony wanted clop and you didn't deliver. Teasing them with the pants going down to show cutie mark. How dare you?

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