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Eventide Indigo


I forget what I wish to remember and remember what I wish to forget.

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Thanks again to Captain Bron3y for a dramatic reading of this.

There are things about Applejack that nopony knows. Even the cowpony herself wishes she could forget. But there are some secrets that are meant to be revealed.

Applejack can't read. And that has haunted her throughout her life.

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Comments ( 28 )

Aww I'll teach you to read applejack!!!!
Btw great story and great creativity!

Wow! Lots good! Much would like long version! Very apple! Wow!

3485720 Heh, doge. :ajsmug:

Thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

Could use a little work, but it's not bad.

3485760 Thanks. I was extremely tired and out-of-it when I wrote this. :twilightblush: But I concur, it needs work.

3485797 I know that feeling.

3485827 :pinkiegasp: Finally! Someone feels my pain.

3485832 Yeah. I need better sleeping habits. And a computer that isn't messed up. I can't even do emotes!

I mean, I guess the story can work, except that I'm pretty sure AJ can read. :derpytongue2:

3485873 Well, this is an alternate universe where she... can't? :applejackunsure:

... ha, I got nothing. :facehoof:

3485853 Eeyup. That it does. But it doesn't stop me from reading stories like this!

I think everyone simply assumed Applehick was an illiterate southerner just like every other stereotype that's incorporated into her character.

Good write. More of a comedy, if you ask me.

3486073 ... :rainbowlaugh: So comedic, I know.

Loved good writing kinda sad though :applecry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry:

You know, I can see this working as a prologue to Bronius Maximus' The Twilight Hours.

3498999 Huh. :twilightsmile: I had never even heard of that until now.

i saw the reading for this.... fucking depressing as hell.... like, i hated when this happened to anyone (except maybe my bullies because revenge, bitch).... like being made fun of for not knowing something. little kids are fucking assholes. inside a cute little kid is just some demon that wants to laugh at you....

this is what i took away from the story..... went on one hell of a tangent.:scootangel:

4141355 Sorry it was so depressing. Although, it was the intended reaction. :twilightsheepish:

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Nah, don't apologize. I'm just sayin its sad...... thats kinda the point, I think.

the story just reminded me of how i had to put up with some of the bullshit in the story. the teacher laughing at you instead of growing the fuck up just stings. the story is in my favorites though, never said i hated it.:moustache:

Sad, not as heart wrenching as some of your other stories, but I have a feeling that wasn't what you were going for.

4370641 Right on the nose! It was more of a warm-up than a tearjerker.

S *hic* o sa *hic* d

5092377 you shouldn't be sorry, you should be making more!

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