By god, Trixie, you are horrible. I didn't read it, though.

There are issues with the wording of your discription, it is recommended you fix it.

" The Great and Powerful Trixie has discovered a spell that causes the minds of ponies within a transmutation circle, she wishes to use this on the Mane Six"

Wat?

Cheers

~iraqlobstah

She gets what she deserves. And so, we all learn a valuable lesson. Never, ever tick off Celestia.

I hope the new description is much better, to be honest, i wrote the other description before i actually wrote the story and i never thought to re-write it

With the description fixed, this should grow in popularity. Hopefully, that is...

Nicely done, btw.

Interesting.

I would just like to thank anyone who read this. It was my first attempt on a fanfiction and i was so surprised when i saw that it had 150+ views, i know that doesn't necessarily means a 150 people read it but it still makes me so very happy it got that much attention.

Thank you all!

EPIC. shame it wasn't featured... I'd totally read something longer of this type... HINT HINT.

Great story. I enjoyed reading it    

>>334500334500

thanks bro, always happy to hear someone enjoyed it, not sure if i want to put more time into it to maybe have it featured on EqD though...

This is a surprise... why is Trixie not on the moon?

>>442886442886

i thought it might have been too much of a cliche...

>>446517446517

Eh... perhaps. The comedy of it would have been the icing on the cake though.

Not bad, not bad at all. I laughed here and there, nice job.

--Octy