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I'm a brony. That's about it. Write when I'm bored or have a REALLY good idea that just won't leave me alone.

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Warning: This story involves spoilers from the series Phoenix Wright/Turnabout Storm. If you have yet to see this series, I suggest watching it before reading this story. Phoenix Wright/Turnabout Storm

After Phoenix Wright saves Rainbow Dash from being banished to the sun, Twilight learns that Trixie took the Prosecution position against Rainbow Dash because of a past altercation between her and Twilight, prior to her arrival in Ponyville. When Twilight confronts Trixie, she is met with disdain and resentment. Knowing that Trixie is hiding a deep secret, she does some investigating on Trixie's past and finds an interesting discovery.

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Why Hello there! I see you also had the same interest to making a story based on the final episode of the Phoenix Wright, Turnabout Storm... :pinkiegasp:

I find this story OBJECTIONable.

I feel that the Ace Attorney series doesn't get enough love from this, and it's all focused on MLP.
Oh well, I love a good pony fic related to my favourite series.

Careful what you wish for, Twilight. Breaking black psyche-locks can have... dire consequences....

Detective Horseshoe, does he wear a trench coat too?

Cue Twilight remembering that Phoenix told her that Mia was dead.

Mia is back.
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH SHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTT.

Also, I pictured Gumshoe as a donkey more than a pony, but whatever.

3607424 Did he? Pretty sure he didn't say her name. He just said it was someone very dear to him.

Comment posted by sonicfan21 deleted Jan 1st, 2014

3712880 Look at part 45 "A Shy Intervention" or the end of Part 4 in video he says word for word "No she doesn't, Mia would never blackmail or murder."

13 seconds after where it is set to start at, it wouldn't go to the exact moment where he says it.

3714681 He didn't say Mia was dead, that's the important part.

3714778 He listed off that he didn't know if Sonata was channeling her or reincarnated which implies death.

3714805 Oh. Right. Forgot about that.

Oh, that explains how Mia showed up. Apparently you don't need a physical body in order to be summoned to Equestria.

3859514 Well remember she's a spirit medium. I figured it could work both ways, one spell causes a physical body and person, such as Phoenix, to come to Equestria, the other brings a spirit or an image of that person's conscience. Using what Celestia said about her accidentally messing up that spell, leaves room for speculation in that kind of situation as to what the spell can do

Keep up the work

Didn't Phoenix explain to Twilight in Part 4 that Mia was dead?

3859994 not in detail. He mentioned her name and reincarnated but nothing much. Also remember that her friend was on trial for murder for so she probably passed the Mia thing off and focused back on the trial

I'm starting to put pieces together. Hopefully after talking with Sonata one more time with the new information I have.

That sounds very similar to Ace Attorney Investigations....

Will Edgeworth be making an appearance at some point?

I applaud your desire to tie up the loose ends from "Turnabout Storm" but let's not forget, despite being set in Equestria, it was also a Phoenix Wright story and I have to say; continuing that storyline without him actually feels...hollow:fluttercry:
You're not thinking in leaving him out completely are you?:applecry:

"Good. Those are locks you don't want to break under any circumstances."
Actually it is revealed in Dual Destinies that the black locks can become more urgent to break than the regular red ones, despite the dangers, the bearer of those locks have to face the truth behind those locks in order to free them from that despair.:trollestia:

3932546 Yeah, the one their guarding has to, but if someone else forces them to, THAT'S when the damage comes into play, and I'm guessing Mia knew that.

3974744 If she did know, I would not put it like Mia did in that particular line.

I take it Dick Horseshoe is a nod to Dick Gumshoe?

Trixie's backstory is suddenly sounding a lot like Edgeworth's. Seriously, a father who's a lawyer? Did you get the idea from that?

The father seems like a mix between Von Karma and Phoenix to me, always looking for the truth but never took a day off.

4323457 I got Lawyer thing from his backstory. But most of the other stuff I didn't get from the game. I still need to play all of them and learn their backstories, but I think I know enough as of right now to finish it

4323841 and you would be correct in my crossing of the two

>>the silk hat doesn't make it to pheonix
thats horrible and you should feel bad.

please hurry and finish it the suspence is killing me

Actually, the Magatama absorbs power given to it, and the power it holds is dependent on the person who gives it. With Pearl, the Magatama was given the power to discover secrets.

Careful Twilight, don't want to force those black psyche locks off. Or you traumatize her!

5933246 OK so i'm new to the Phoenix Wright series and I"m REALLY confused... Whats the deal with the black locks???

6435294 Spoilers for Apollo Justice and Dual Destinies

Black Psyche Locks are locks that hold a secret that those with the locks don't even know. If u try to force them they traumatize the wearer

There are a few extraneous apostrophes here, mostly it's/its errors, though there's also a "you're" where it should be "your", and a "who's" in place of "whose". Please fix.

Aside from that, this is shaping up to be an interesting story. Reading on...

3474366
I Feel Sonata broke them that is why she broke down.

https://aceattorney.fandom.com/wiki/Phoenix_Wright

Pheonix

Notice any discrepancies? I'll give you a hint. It's OE. Press CTRL + F, and type Pheonix. You'll be amased on how MANY words you'll find on this page.

This fic suffers from the same thing many others. It goes too fast. I mean, it's good that Trixie doesn't hate Twilight. But you don't get over your problems that fast. That said, you don't get stuck in the middle as well. You go away, you turn your life around, then you return a completely different person.

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