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Stories (12)

  • Awaken, Scootaloo
    When Scootaloo loses hope, Princess Luna is there to help her learn to dream again.

    6,299 words · 2,486 views · 445 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Diary of a Silent Tyrant
    Encased in stone, Discord observes the events around him and reflects on his life
    3,162 words · 5,886 views · 594 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Checkmates
    After finding a chess set in the library's storage closet, Twilight is eager to play a few games and turns to Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Teaching the two most competitive ponies in Ponyville a new game should be a snap, right? RIGHT?!
    3,773 words · 5,705 views · 432 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Diary of a Pliant Tyrant
    When Fluttershy finds out that Discord used to keep a mental diary while imprisoned in stone, she begs him to continue it. Grudgingly, he promises to document his thoughts about his new life among old enemies
    16,437 words · 6,628 views · 752 likes · 12 dislikes
  • Apple Ninjas and Other Vital Concerns
    3,732 words · 783 views · 133 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Cheerilee's Thousand
    43,318 words · 3,135 views · 423 likes · 6 dislikes
  • The Carrot Dog Fight
    3,594 words · 877 views · 91 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Easy As Pie
    7,385 words · 4,119 views · 223 likes · 5 dislikes
  • A Door Jam
    9,923 words · 2,459 views · 213 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Taking A Job For Granite
    32,766 words · 2,007 views · 176 likes · 4 dislikes

Blog Posts (367)


The Crystal Empire is slowly being destroyed by a patchwork monstrosity of unspeakable power.  King Sombra's forces have fought valiantly, but what hope did they have against a creature that can twist reality itself?  In a desperate bid to save his people, Sombra, and his wife, Queen Chrystal, have called the great Star Swirl the Bearded.  However, solutions often come with a heavy price.  Sometimes the results aren't what were expected.

Cover art by Ezpt (2135D here on FIMFiction)

First Published
25th Nov 2013
Last Modified
8th Jan 2014

Comments ( 16 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·

Wait.

This is...

OH HELL YES IT'S FINALLY OUT!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#2 · Chapter 2 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·

Looks like you might have botched the italics.

This creature...  I wonder, is it Discord?

The lion's paw it has...  And what it said...

~Skeeter The Lurker

#3 · Chapter 2 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3534383  Damn it!  That's the second time I've screwed italics up today.

Thanks for catching that!

#4 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·

I'm getting a kind of Game of Thrones feel from the perspectives you're doing.

I quite like it.

All in all, this is a incredibly awesome start to this fic.  I can;t wait to see where it goes.

~Skeeter The Lurker

#5 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3534403

You're quite welcome!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#6 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3534405  Thanks, man.  I wanted to use some different perspective to get across the feel of the world.  

#7 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·

Oooh, I like the new take on Sombra. I'm guessing you already have a plan for how he's going to be corrupted? It already seems like his heart was torn out... Is there anything more to it than that?

#8 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 1d ago · · ·

>>3535932  Lots more.  The next few chapters will explain a lot.

#9 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 23h ago · · ·

This looks promising.

#10 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 23h ago · · ·

>>3544008  Why, thank you!

#11 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 5d ago · · ·

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

#12 · Chapter 3 · 19w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3555944  Yes, it's been submitted already, but EQD waits are usually pretty long, so I wouldn't expect to see it there for a month, at least.

But thanks for having the confidence in it to think it should be submitted!  I really appreciate it!

#13 · Chapter 2 · 17w, 1d ago · · ·

Run away, my crystal pony equivalent.

#14 · Chapter 4 · 14w, 6d ago · · ·

I noticed one error (I wrote this down on my notepad earlier, but forgot about it until now):

Sombra’s mouth had sagged open as the creature fell to the ground, cackling and clutching its stomach. “Oh! Oh, you should see the look on your face! You’re simple too much!”

Also, just a nitpicky thought, you could probably remove the 'had' here. Though that really is a tiny detail. :pinkiecrazy:

#15 · Chapter 4 · 14w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3722561 Thanks!  It's never too late to point out an error to me.  I love squashing them!

#16 · Chapter 2 · 12w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3534383 it's probably Discord

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