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xjuggernaughtx

Joined June 2012
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Still kinda wishes he could hang out with Twilight Sparkle.

Stories (12)

  • Awaken, Scootaloo
    When Scootaloo loses hope, Princess Luna is there to help her learn to dream again.

    6,531 words · 4,502 views · 588 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Diary of a Silent Tyrant
    Encased in stone, Discord observes the events around him and reflects on his life
    3,162 words · 6,525 views · 654 likes · 7 dislikes
  • Apple Ninjas and Other Vital Concerns
    Big Mac shows Apple Bloom that the farm can be a blast, even when her friends are all busy for the day.
    3,725 words · 1,141 views · 161 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Checkmates
    After finding a chess set in the library's storage closet, Twilight is eager to play a few games and turns to Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Teaching the two most competitive ponies in Ponyville a new game should be a snap, right? RIGHT?!
    3,673 words · 6,156 views · 457 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Cheerilee's Thousand
    66,251 words · 4,778 views · 594 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Diary of a Pliant Tyrant
    16,437 words · 7,820 views · 813 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Easy As Pie
    7,385 words · 4,445 views · 231 likes · 5 dislikes
  • The Carrot Dog Fight
    3,570 words · 1,042 views · 100 likes · 1 dislikes
  • A Door Jam
    10,190 words · 2,923 views · 224 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Taking A Job For Granite
    32,766 words · 2,129 views · 181 likes · 5 dislikes

Blog Posts (431)


The Crystal Empire is slowly being destroyed by a patchwork monstrosity of unspeakable power.  King Sombra's forces have fought valiantly, but what hope did they have against a creature that can twist reality itself?  In a desperate bid to save his people, Sombra, and his wife, Queen Chrystal, have called the great Star Swirl the Bearded.  However, solutions often come with a heavy price.  Sometimes the results aren't what were expected.

Cover art by Ezpt (2135D here on FIMFiction)

First Published
25th Nov 2013
Last Modified
8th Jan 2014

Comments ( 16 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·

Wait.

This is...

OH HELL YES IT'S FINALLY OUT!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#2 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·

Looks like you might have botched the italics.

This creature...  I wonder, is it Discord?

The lion's paw it has...  And what it said...

~Skeeter The Lurker

#3 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3534383  Damn it!  That's the second time I've screwed italics up today.

Thanks for catching that!

#4 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·

I'm getting a kind of Game of Thrones feel from the perspectives you're doing.

I quite like it.

All in all, this is a incredibly awesome start to this fic.  I can;t wait to see where it goes.

~Skeeter The Lurker

#5 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3534403

You're quite welcome!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#6 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3534405  Thanks, man.  I wanted to use some different perspective to get across the feel of the world.  

#7 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 3d ago · · ·

Oooh, I like the new take on Sombra. I'm guessing you already have a plan for how he's going to be corrupted? It already seems like his heart was torn out... Is there anything more to it than that?

#8 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3535932  Lots more.  The next few chapters will explain a lot.

#9 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·

This looks promising.

#10 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3544008  Why, thank you!

#11 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

#12 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3555944  Yes, it's been submitted already, but EQD waits are usually pretty long, so I wouldn't expect to see it there for a month, at least.

But thanks for having the confidence in it to think it should be submitted!  I really appreciate it!

#13 · Chapter 2 · 39w, 2d ago · · ·

Run away, my crystal pony equivalent.

#14 · Chapter 4 · 37w, 8h ago · · ·

I noticed one error (I wrote this down on my notepad earlier, but forgot about it until now):

Sombra’s mouth had sagged open as the creature fell to the ground, cackling and clutching its stomach. “Oh! Oh, you should see the look on your face! You’re simple too much!”

Also, just a nitpicky thought, you could probably remove the 'had' here. Though that really is a tiny detail. :pinkiecrazy:

#15 · Chapter 4 · 37w, 8h ago · · ·

>>3722561 Thanks!  It's never too late to point out an error to me.  I love squashing them!

#16 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3534383 it's probably Discord

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