This is the kind of story that makes me want to jump for joy -- and at the same time, makes me feel entirely inadequate as an author.

You have The Magics!  

That could work...I mean only an imaginary friend could be like Pinkie.

And I think the statue Celestia was looking at was Discord...who knows..

This is without a doubt the cleverest fic I have ever read!

Wow... just... wow!

Oooh.. I feel chilly.

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:| ....Goddammit, this is now my headcanon. This story is AWESOME.

Love it

To good for a oneshort, needs more.

Headcanon accepted.

They were referencing Nightmare Moon or Discord at the end. (Im sexy and) I KNOW IT!

>>294685294685

That's what I had in mind.

My god. I love you. You're a genius and I love you.

That was awesome.

Oooooh... that was clever. You are a very clever pony and you should feel very clever.

What an idea! An amazing concept coupled with some really heartfelt emotional conflict-- the tings I enjoy the most in a story. Wonderful, wonderful!

And that end... was actually perfect. I shivered a little bit, imagining a sort of camera-pan towards Discord in the garden. Discord as an imaginary friend would make perfect sense. He seems relatively benign for something that embodies chaos. I mean, no one dies, no one is seriously hurt directly by him, and he even surrenders the location to the only weapons capable of defeating him. He's a mean imaginary friend of a god playing a game. A mean game... but still a game.

I love this idea so much. I want this to be canon is how much I love it.

I'm not going to induct this into my headcanon, but only because I already have a complex setup in place involving Pinkie's sisters, parents, and the various occupational perils of petriculture. Rest assured, I still think that this is still a fantastically thought out and written origin story. Well done!

I've seen Pinkie as a standard pony... Pinkie as a cyborg clone from a colony of outer-space Pinkies... Pinkie as the embodiment of primordial chaos and a danger to all of Equestria... As the grand-daughter of Loki, or as the assistant of Death from another realm, as a killer, as an amnesiac, as an inventor and as a Great Old One...

And now I can add 'imaginary friend' to that list as well.  She Of The Many Origins.

Shivers at the last part. Thank you for writing this, you are a genius. I shall be watching you.

This story is good and you should feel good for writing it.

Pinkie-as-imaginary-friend is fantastic, and the Surprise reference is even better.

I want to hear about Celestea and lunar making an imaginary friend into a real pony

really good story, and  wonderful ending, i hope there will be a story about luna and celestia creating discord ,too

and, mind fuck

.....Mind blown

I`m impressed.

Well done.

Wow.  That was amazing! I love the way you structured the revelation and made it make sense.

This is the coolest fan-fic I have EVER READ. Have my thumbs and stars.

Wow, that was good!

This story is at least 19.3 levels of awesome.

Well crap. I don't know what to say about this. It's heartwarming, and a little sad at the same time. That'd be so strange. To have created your best friend, and not have her be merely imaginary.

I only got the part about Discord after comparing some comments and the last few sentences, but that one actually almost brought a tear to my eye. Because that's kind of heartbreaking, because what if he was benign at first, but they got bored in their godhood-ness and forgot about him, only for him to become angry?

That was absolutely brilliant. I'm so glad I decided to take the time to read this.

I really don't even know right now. Surprise=Pinkie=My poor brain's utter confusion. Beautifully written though, so congrats on that.

First impression:

Huh, Pinkie must have a sad past or something.

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By the end:

THATMAKESSOMUCHFUCKINGSENSEYOUJUSTBLEWMYGODDAMNMIND

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This is... plausible, almost. Yeah, damn a mindscrew and a half-and I love it! And the end with Discord and the Elements? Perfect capper.

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my reaction

Wow just wow.

HEADCANON ASSIMILATION PROCESSING...

MIND. BLOWN.

Course, this makes TwiPie an incredibly awkward ship. But still, I think this'll become headcanon for me anyway. Also makes Discord more tragic, which is a sad plus.

at first i was all like: this is funny and it's a really good book

then i was all like: hmm so pinkie's just twi's imaginary friend from her fillyhood? well that makes sense.

then after the end i was just all like: wow they created Discord? and....... 3........... 2..........1 ..... aaaaand MINDFUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD NIGHT EVERYPONY!!!!!!!!!!!

My closest theory/prediction was Pinkie coming from the 4th wall. Others included Twi's sister, orphan, and spy from the Griffan kingdom. I was blindsided by the 'Twi's imaginary friend' origin.

Thumbs up and favorited!

I will never look at Pinkie Pie the same way again!

And I LOVE it!

3/5. While an interesting idea through and through, the actual content needs cleaning up in several places. I recommend reading a style book.

Try harder. Don't just push for excellency. Push for perfection.

Woah.

...

So...

Can they still date?

This was shear BRILLIANCE.

5/5 for sure.

Wow... This is... New. BUT IT MAKES SENSE!

Mind = blown.

3, 2, 1, headcanon updated!

Niiice. Not quite up to being incorporated into my headcanon, but still a good story to have and an interesting and original take on our favorite pink cluster of highly-localized insanity singularities.

Very, very good show, sir. Quite lovely.

O.O ........

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This is incredible!  I................

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words are inadequate here.   I need something stronger......  Nope, I've got nothing.

Your story is awesome and brilliant.

What were they smoking to come up with discord?

Great overall....much better a reason than 'Pinkie Pie is an escaped mental patient' reason more commonly used.

Whoah.

I've seen all sorts of explorations of Pinkie's childhood and her family, but this one's unique. Mind-blowing!

O.O it's all so clear now

... THIS. ALL OF MY THIS. THIS FOREVER.

This is now my headcanon. FOR-EV-ER.

Dear Twilight Sparkle:

tl;dr

This is.... wow......

Way to make my Fics look like crap

Woah.... talk about a mindfuck. o___o Very interesting story there, well done. xD

Well, that explains her similarity to Bloo, doesn't it?

Waht a

Huh...

And Pinkie is an Element of Harmony after all that? That's all I can really think about.

Bloody heck. That's incredible.

Just......Wow......

Nice tie in with the FIM stroyline, and that part where it says SHE WAS IMAGINARY.......just *BANG*. My brain is now gone.

Ill send you my cleaning and surgical bills from this epic explosion of awsome

For a moment there at the end I had the weird idea Celestia was referring to Luna being her imaginary friend she created. Her or Discord, I suppose it works either way.

Though Luna being Celestias imaginary friend makes a lot of sense in a way, if you think about it. Celestia wanted a sister, but Luna couldn't cope with her powers and became Nightmare Moon and had to be banished. Then a thousand years later they're both given a second cance. That's what Celestia meant when she said, "We were meant to rule together..." That was what she intended when she created Luna.

Well, that was certainly a trip.

I was starting to worry around when Twilight started explaining her imaginary friend.  I was worrying that it would end with Pinkie Pie being fully imaginary along with all her other friends .

That would have been an interesting ending indeed, but I prefer this one.

Excellent job here, lad.

damn, this story was good!

Wait..Wait. You are telling me that Luna and Celestia tried to make a pony and they created Discord????

That... actually makes sense!...My mind is melting

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This is going straight to my favourite list.

>>298304298304

I can't help but notice that you're assuming Discord was brought to life on purpose...

>>298376298376

Oh sorry but i think you missunderstood. It partially is my fault because of my wrong way of expressing my self.

Well,no, i got the part, that Doscord was created by accident.

I was only trying to point out the ingeniousness of the whole idea

So Celestia and Luna made Discord. Huh.

Honestly speechless, bravo! I'm so glad i read this, totally changed my view of.. life!

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Why does this make so much sense?

The new head canon instalation has been complete, Now the Unicorn Gundam will be on par of the legendary ZZ Gundam in firepower terms

Dat ending!

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Very cool story, did not see it coming.

>>298628298628 That moment when you and the author have the same profile picture...

>>298376298376 Shoot. I was really hoping that even just Luna was an imaginary friend, and that before her, Celestia was all alone...... I mean, you can't have two princesses, it doesn't make sense. Unless one was just a thought...

And then maybe all the other ponies were imaginary, too! Created to be non-god-like friends for the princesses! And then they had foals, and the princesses just sort of stopped making imaginary friends after that. SO much headcanon.

Thank you for writing this, I applaud you and would put a picture of some gif of someone clapping but I can't for the life of me figure out how pictures work in the comments. Bravo!

but... my mind already has... *is threatened by pinkie* okay, okay!

*headcanon dimension #3728 acknowledged* oh, and that las paragraph.

oh, *eh-hem* and, More, Please!

This fic made me smile, smile, smile! I love it!

REJECTED!

Great Googly Moogly! That makes just so much freaking sense! And the ending!

Okay, now I want to know the backstory of the Princess' comments at the end!

I was worried it would go a dark route about a third of the wave through, but instead I got a lovely story.

Thank you sir, and bravo.

Sequel please...

>>294731294731 For me it's competing with the idea that she's an escaped cartoon character.

This is amazing. Not only does it explain Pinkie Pie's strange powers and backstory, but it explains how she can be the perfect friend for so many ponies, because she was literally created to be somepony's perfect friend. I have to admit - I cried when I figured it out. It's just too perfect.

I loved those last few lines saying how Luna was just Celestia's imaginary friend and when the first episode happened things went really bad!

>>295137295137

Have you seen the one where she is Warner Brother's cartoon who escaped to Equestria through the barriers between fictional continuities?

>>299478299478 Whats that story called? I'm interested.

... I have no words...  I loved it, keep up the good work.

>>299529299529

The story where she is a 'Toon is "The Truth About Pinkie Pie".

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zjaU3G3KAd-GUfOce39b5U_w9h4mOvjHZtQnQFJwCmU/edit?hl=en&authkey=CLvA7PQD

ooww, my head hurts now, still a brilliant story.

Mind is now blown.

Once I see things this way, I CANNOT UNSEE.

Bravo, sir. Have all my internets.

>headcanon.exe has stopped working

>checking for a solution to problem

>system 32 has crashed

>reset Y/N

>Y

>newheadcanon.exe is being uploaded

>newheadcanon.exe has successfully been uploaded

Seriously though this story is going straight to my favorites

This makes so much sense and it's just perfect. I fully accept this as my headcanon and I now feel the urge to write something Surprise/Pinkie Pie related. Thank you for the wonderful story

worale, demasiado buena la trama de la historia

this was awesome to say the least

>>296609296609 I feel the same way brutha!

The dislikes are like a ninja... you know it's there, but you can't see it

So I was right all along, (Pi times (square root of negative one) divided by zero) equals Pinkie Pie.

Faved, liked, downloaded, and added to the Twilight Sparkle centric groups.

THIS IS BRILLIANT!!

At first i was worried that Pinkie would disappear when Twi figured it all out but when it all turned out okay i was like

AAAAAAAAAAAA!

So! Frikkin! AWESOME!

This is, without a doubt, the most spectacular short story I've read in a long time!

Also, not to rush you, but... what's the story with Celestia and Luna?

Yes I am actually trying to somehow fit this into a headcanon that has Octavia and Scratch as pinkies sisters. I'll just play it off as time was a bit warped from the creation of pinkie that it sent her back and caused her to be adopted into the pie family. So yes it modifies the story a bit. Gods, my headcanon its getting insanely complex.

omg so good, briliant!!!!!!!!!!!

I see where this is going...

BRAVO BRAVO! Very well done! I approve of it with every fiber of my being! It doesn't make sense in a few parts, but other than those, BRAVO!  :luna: