• Member Since 1st Nov, 2013
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Tyro96


A bit of a writer though i usually get ideas from other stories

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Frozen in time Captain Ensis, finds himself awoken in Ponyville desperately trying to find a way to get by in this strange new world. Can he manage to do so while avoiding all the dangers of this magical place he now must call home. Will he ever be able to even find a life here either, or will he be shunned by those around him for what he is?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )

Who's the guy in the story picture?

the concept of the story is good but the grammar is bad and the structure is fast and inconsistent. if you can fix it then you will make this into a good read

3521547 It is supposed to be Ensis though I couldn't find a picture that really looked exactly like him so I settled for the one on the cover.

3521619 I know, though I haven't been able to work on them that much since school has me doing Pre-cal and the Army is having me doing physical training, but I'm gonna try to get a friend of mine to proof read the chapters. :twilightblush:

keep it up btw I would ask for proof readers that would help

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