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    One year after a traumatic accident sends Rainbow Dash into a tailspin of depression and isolation, Applejack decides it's high time she forces her friend to confront her emotions, and locking the pair into a house for the weekend seems viable.
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  • T "Now Kiss!"

    Pretending Scootaloo is captured by a Manticore, the remaining Crusaders stage an elaborate and dangerous scheme to unveil the true feelings of Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Original music, AppleDash.
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  • T Ranch Hands

    Sent to a Ranch to improve her attitude and relations in her losing soccer team, Rainbow Dash realizes she is quickly falling for the female farm worker, Applejack.
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  • E 'Twas the Eve of Hearth's Warming

    An equestrian variation of the famous poem. Applejack and Rainbow Dash are snowed in one Hearth's Warming Eve, and due to their constant fighting, experience a visit from the mythical Windigos.
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  • T Well Beyond Reform

    In a Catholic boarding school, Rainbow Dash must navigate intolerance and discrimination to learn to accept herself, and hope that others might come to do so too.
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  • T triple dog

    Six young girls engage is a risky game of dares, with a pile of valuables at stake and a shaved head for anyone who fails. Based on the movie of the same name. AppleDash, FlutterMac.
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    United at Last!

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    The Big 10,000

    I'd just like to take a moment to thank all my supporters for helping me reach 10,000 story views. It's been a wonderful few months since I joined FIMfiction, and you all have made me feel very welcome and appreciated. Considering I have no school next week, I am hoping to pump out a couple chapters for some of my stories, and maybe do some art too. Again, thank you all, I love you guys!

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    Own Hail Mary?!

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    Ask the Manticores!

    That's right everyone, Merry Christmas! Arby and I have decided to make a Hail Mary Ask Blog, including original artwork by the two of us.

    If we've got it all set up right... which, I hope we do... You'll be able to ask us any question you like, and it will be replied to by the characters of our created universe of Hail Mary. Feel free to ask a question to any character, but be aware that it is mostly monitored by captain Rainbow Dash, so expect some ridiculous and perverse answers (NSFW).

    For those of you who do not know what an Ask Blog is:

    Ask Blog: An Ask Blog is a blog in which visitors ask questions to the characters involved (in this case, to any character(s) in the Hail Mary universe), and the blogger(s) (aka Arby Works and myself, Ezrienel) respond to these questions, often with drawn pictures/fanart included in these responses. So, basically, you go to the site and type in a question for any of the characters, and we will do our best to respond to these questions promptly and in an interesting way. Ask away!

    For the original work, click Hail Mary. For the Blog, click Ask The Manticores. Enjoy, and comment/ask away!!

    Also... for me, the tumblr site keeps crashing my browser... but that could just be my crappy computer, because it doesn't happen to Arby... tell me what you find.

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    New Artwork: Hail Mary

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#1 · 51w, 1d ago · 2 · · Blue Blazer ·

yay

#2 · 51w, 1d ago · 4 · · Blue Blazer ·

How are you so fabulous all the time? Like, is there some sort of secret writing ritual I should be looking into? I draw the line at human sacrifices, but I'm sure I could scrounge up a head of cabbage or something to use as an offering.

In all seriousness, I saw that you had written a new story and did a little jig in my computer chair (disclaimer: seated jigs look really stupid, do not attempt them in public). The premise seems really promising so far and your character interaction is great, as usual. Looking forward to the next bit already, whenever its ready. :twilightsmile:

#3 · 51w, 1d ago · 1 · · Blue Blazer ·

>>3458879 Summoning Sheogorath rarely goes as planned. Oh and I think that particular ritual requires a bit of string as well.

#4 · 51w, 1d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

I agree with Ladyhart21. I don't read who the author is  when I jump into a story, but about halway through reading this I thought, "god damn, Ez wrote this, didn't she?" You've got a lotta skill, very recognizable but awesome writing.

#5 · 51w, 1d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

Darn, saw the cover and thought it was gonna be a CherriJack. Oh well, AppleDash is alright too.

#6 · 51w, 1d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

I'm hooked :twilightblush:

please continue :yay:

#8 · 51w, 1d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

(Before I even read it) *looks at author* YEP, I'm already hooked! If Ez wrote it, I'm probably going to like it! :pinkiehappy:

#9 · 51w, 1d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

That. was. AMAZING!!  but the kiss was really unexpected... that sneaky rainbow!! :rainbowlaugh: i hope to see a chapter two! :twilightsmile:

Awesome work again. I expected nothing else when I saw that there is a new story :pinkiesmile:

Totally love the setting. Let's see where this is going!

New story. New AppleDash.

You, my friend, earned a mustache. :moustache:

:ajsmug::heart::rainbowwild:

>>3459035

Oh, there may be some CherryJack too, we shall see :ajsmug:

>>3458879

A jig for my new story?? Aweeeeeeeeeesome :rainbowwild: !!

>>3459032

I hope the recognizably is a good thing :twilightblush: glad you like it, anyway

Another day, another amazing story by Ezrienel. The best thing about you is that I don't have to worry if the story is ever gonna be finished o canceled; or good or bad; or slow or fast in its updates. I always know it's gonna be a great story, that it's gonna be finished at some point, and that updates are not once every three months (as it is with so many others). It's a privilege for us AppleDash fans that you went for this pairing.

Now that I'm done with the usual praising, I must say the new angle for this story is very interesting. It reminds me of Ranch Hands, being this the first meeting of AJ and Dash. They started a lot better than in that one though (I guess after Curveball and Hail Mary, somehow Rainbow didn't want to wait so much to kiss her girl). And it was such a coincidence that when I discovered the story, I was listening Creedence Clearwater Revival, specifically the song Feelin' Blue, perfect mood and title for the chapter.

Added to favourites like all of your stories (I've loved them all, the only one I didn't comment was Triple Dog, not because I didn't like it, but because I cheated and read the plot of the movie in the Internet, so I was unworthy).

#14 · 51w, 14h ago · 1 · · Blue Blazer ·

>>3460800

As usual, thank you for the glowing praise.

I decided to veer away from the sports themes I seem to usually take, and go for something a little more... I don't know, different. I haven't seen many restaurant style stories, so I thought I'd try my hand at it. I recently started working at one, so I'm kind of in a learning curve right now.

Also, with the kiss stuff? I kinda thought it might be interesting to try avoiding my usual sexual-tension-for-twenty-thousand-words-before-stuff-happens route. But of course, that doesn't mean that there won't be good stuff to come.

EDIT:

Twenty-thousand? Make that almost 100,000 in Hail Mary....

Always a pleasure reading your stuff, Ezry...

>>3460857

The ellipsis at the end of that makes me uneasy... lol? :twilightoops:

So. Is Rainbow eventually going to drink Applejack? :)

And yet another of your stories I have on my favorites. I think you are the author who appears most consistently in my favorites. Enjoying the fic so far, especially AJ and RD's characterizations. It's a nice departure from how it usually goes with a romance between them.

>>3464829

Glad to hear I appear so often in your favourites! I try and do something a little different with them each time, but my headcanon of them will probably get predictable after writing another ten stories. heh... :twilightblush:

Things ARE getting interesting. I hope Jubilee isn't that bad as it seems is gonna be, but we'll have to wait and see.

Very nice chapter overall.

Eyeup, Rainbow Dash holding a service job. Let's see how that will work :pinkiehappy:

I really like where this is going!

Needs Alternate universe tag

#24 · 50w, 6d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

You have out-done yourself yet again. This is the first story I've read in a long time that really kept me reading until the end. I'm looking forward to this one. As always, I am your faithful reader.:ajsmug:

>>3465173

Oh shoot, thanks for reminding me. I suppose it's pretty obvious, but still, needs to be tagged I suppose.

I think the "human" tag covers the alternate universe one. But since the release of Equestria Girls this could be debatable.

OMFG YES ANOTHER STORY!!!! YOU SERIOUSLY MAKE MY LIFE MATE! IT'S LIKE I DONT EVEN CARE WHAT HAPPENS FOR THE REST OF THE DAY BECAUSE IM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: *heavy breathing* (Plus Schpog's awesome amazing work as the cover art sadkjfhaskdfh man I was so excited when I saw that)

#28 · 50w, 5d ago · · · Blue Blazer ·

The barmaid AJ is just too sexy to imagine.......I like this story!:heart::heart:

#29 · 50w, 4d ago · · · Mojito ·

this gonna be good :derpyderp1:

#30 · 50w, 4d ago · · · Mojito ·

I can feel the tension. :pinkiegasp: You've got me on the edge of my seat as always.

#31 · 50w, 4d ago · 2 · · Mojito ·

I'm loving this amorously antagonistic portrayal of Cherry Jubilee.  She always did seem so manipulative in the show.  :rainbowkiss:

#32 · 50w, 3d ago · 4 · · Mojito ·

Jubilee, I dare you to come between Dash and AJ. I double dare you. If you got between them, I think you'll have a bad time :ajbemused:

More characters! Wohoo. Totally with "Comments4u" here. This is gonna be good:rainbowkiss:

#33 · 50w, 3d ago · · · Mojito ·

A stray from the norm, yet still AppleDash? Yes please :3

Let the shipping begin!!

#34 · 50w, 3d ago · · · Mojito ·

The plot thickens :trollestia:

Nice chapter, kind of introductory to some characters and to the Jubilee Factor; I cringed a little when she started talking with AJ (I love that character so much that I take things like this in stories almost personally), I hope Dash gets to help her with that soon. It was little short by your standards (you've spoiled your readers), but it really keeps you wanting more.

#35 · 50w, 3d ago · · · Mojito ·

>>3479268

I know exactly what you mean, I love my AJ and RD, so having someone complicate it like this personally pisses me off. But some people like it, so I'm experimenting. The next chapter is a bit longer, don't worry. :pinkiehappy:

huh...interesting

#37 · 50w, 15h ago · 1 · · Dirty Blonde ·

You did it Jubilee. You did it!

Now if you excuse me, I need to sign some contracts that you are going to hell with me. See you there you demon :flutterrage:

You truly made her something.

Something I want to kill, slowly and painfully, and watch her rot and burn alive, while hearing her screams of endless agony as music to my ears.

>>3493254

Well that's descriptive, and I must say I agree. I was angry even just writing this, buuuut for the sake of the story... I bit the bullet.

Don't be fooled by my words, the story and the chapter are still amazing. The fact that I felt so angered while reading is proof of that. I just had to say something.

>>3493267

well, definitely good to hear! :pinkiehappy:

I can guess why no man can satisfy you Jubilee and can tell you you'll have the same problem with woman since they don't want to satisfy you so they perfom poorly and then go cry in a corner since they had to do «it» with you. Cause you know being black mailled isn't a turn on for most people.

P.S. Good job Rainbow she needed that.

Jubilee's not going to like Rainbow with her barmaid at all...

And knowing Rainbow shes not really one to back down from a challenge :rainbowderp:

#44 · 50w, 12h ago · 1 · · Dirty Blonde ·

Rainbow's gonna murder Jubilee if she finds out what she does to her Applejack. :rainbowderp: Or atleast she'll try..

And yet another great chapter from another fantastic story by you. You've been my favorite author since I've read Ranch Hands and it just keeps getting better and better.

Keep up the awesome work! :pinkiehappy:

>>3493872

Wow, such a devoted fan! Glad to hear it, and I hope not to disappoint you. Thanks for reading, and super-thanks for commenting!

Rainbow dash will lose it if she finds out what is going on.

this is gonna be good :pinkiehappy:

Thank you for not making every other character a sheer guess of who they're humanizing. You wouldn't believe what a pain it is. And for that AND being a great author. I give you this...

It sure brought a smile to my day. Hope it does to yours too.

Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Infamous IF deleted at 3:33am on the 16th of November, 2013

As someone that has had to deal with a boss/employee relationship with me in the same position of AJ... You hit the nail on the head in describing the way it feels. It was, without a doubt, the most humiliating six months I ever had to deal with in my life. And once I left it, I am grateful every single day that I found a different job that could support me and my son.

Great job on this fic Ezrienel. You have got some real talent here. Makes me glad I faved the story.

Oh... Oh dear. Now I have to know what will happen.

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