Applejack decided the time is finally right to tell Rainbow Dash something she has been keeping a secret for too long.
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CONTINUE! MAKE MOAR!
I remember when I got so many views to start with... Good luck out there. Nice approach, by the way.
Great, just remember to use double quotes for dialogue.
Really liked it, though
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!
OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! Please continue! Or Fluttershy won't be happy.
I AM SOOOOO finishing this MAKE MORE!!!
I love the fact that everyone uttered a collective "FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU" when they finished reading this... So allow me to join in and say "MORE!".
Glad you all liked the first chapter, hope the second and final part meets your approval too! It's a bit cliched, but I thought it was a good place to start writing something romantic!
3431329 It fit like a glove. I love it.
Perfect pacing. That's all that comes to mind really! I LOVED the tension in the first chapter and the second gave me such a relief and joy-joy....bleh.
Great story! Can't wait to finish it!!
3431329 it was awesome!!! Please post more!!!
3431329 Do a series of stories around this bro!
This was so bootiful! I'm gonna cry.
3431556>>3431556>>3431501>>3431468>>3431430>>3431173>>3430655>>3430462>>3430336>>3429706 Thanks for all the kind coments!
It's my first time even considering writing something like this, so I'm glad it turned out so well!
3431329 great story mate! Short and sweet, sometimes they're the best! 3431556 WTF? I keep running into you! Around half the fanfics I've read have a comment by you!
Buck it, cuz of that, I'm following you, mate! 
The feels
Relay cute and magnificent story i give it a 9/10. cold hawe some iner dialoge with Dash aftter AJ told her but it is just a miner detail that don't need to be there.
Appledash as next best shipping.
Sweet and cute story. And with one of the best pairings too
Great Story. I was socked when Rainbow said no and couldn't read because I had to do some stuff
but when I came back and finished it i was like 
and i would love to see another one maybe like a squeal. Keep up the good work.
That was dawww
Good job. It's nice, shappy... I liked
3443005 Well name one
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Well, I thought they allready were toghter, so I thought she would, well maby say she were having a foal or something! Still great story thou!
THE FEELS. OHHHH CELESTIA THE FEELS.
Hey, congrats! You just succeeded in making me go crazy! *clap clap clap*
So cute. RD saying no at first caught me off guard haha. I'm glad it worked out.