When lost in a blizzard, Cadence finds a frigid Sombra, and learns that they had lives before Equestria- and they knew each other. What will be uncovered as Cadence sees the light in Sombra- and how it went out.
To quote Oscar Wilde, "I don't have any underwear on, and I don't care!"
When lost in a blizzard, Cadence finds a frigid Sombra, and learns that they had lives before Equestria- and they knew each other. What will be uncovered as Cadence sees the light in Sombra- and how it went out.
the name of this made me think of the episode of Adventure Time
Feedback is appreciated! Please, give your honest opinion. Please do not judge the entire story on the first few chapters, for they are not an excellent indicator for the rest of it.
not bad...
3535989 thanks! I'm wondering if I should continue this story though....
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what's keeping you continuing?
3540240 eh, i didn't know how much time it would take to have two fics running at the same time. That and juggling schoolwork, (senior years, crap-ton of work) and domestic commitments. It's difficult.
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*nods* I can understand.
Your KILLING me here smalls. Chris-Chrysalis, Alex-Discord, who's next?
it lives yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
it would take forever to say that many yeses
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Alex/Discord calling Sombra Sombrero was cute and quite funny!
Perfect!
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate it.
I take that Chris decided to punch Alex/Discord in the nose.
God this is an amazing idea and wrote amazingly, love it
Why does this remind me of someone I know,
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IT WASNT ME
Adorable, simply adorable.
Thanks so much for all your support! It means so much when you take the time to comment! I appreciate it more than you can know!
Aww. Little Trace is adorable!
UPDATE!!!
Another good chapter sir, have a moustache
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Aww. Thanks so much guys!
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No problem, you make saying how awesome this story is so easy for us
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you're just too good. I know this may feel like I'm just dumping another bucket of warm, soapy compliments and thank-yous on the people who read the story, but you and the others who take the time out to read really do make me a lot more inspired to continue, and oh, do I want to continue. MAJOR plot developments are coming up, and I look forward to writing it as I hope you look forward to reading it!
Hm
Not
Well
Huh
Committed
Hah
Just missing some upper case letters, but still nice chapter, wonder what was up with Cadence?
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Yeah, sorry about the grammar. I like to think I have high standards, but today I had to run to a meeting with friends, and I really wanted to finish the chapter. Sorry! I hate reading badly-edited fics too man, I'll have to up my standards!
HEHEHE THE PLOT THICKENS
-guys? What happened?
The new chapter was intended to flesh out sombra as a character, but someone removed a like and added a dislike.
I mean- I'm not personally offended, I'm just not sure about what went wrong.
-did people think this was a ship fic? It kinda is, in a way, but it's more pseudo-backstory alternate universe stuff about Sombra.
-where did I go wrong in this? Oh well, nothing to do but push on. I hope some people will stick with me as I try to make the story a bit more interesting.
Much love
-the slightly deflated Strata
Maybe italicize the dream so it's easier to tell, cause dreams are thoughts, but still good chapter, like the backstory
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Thanks man. I'll keep that in mind.