After Princess Luna warns Rarity and Rainbow Dash of the wraith haunting Ponyville on Nightmare Night, the pair spend a fright-filled night at the boutique. Can they stop the wraith, or will they become its latest victims?
Written for the RariDash Nightmare Night contest.
HAHAHA!
Nice!
This was a good one!
~Skeeter The Lurker
YES!
That was great. I loved that Dash had it figured out from the start.
I feel like this story ended right before it got to the good part...
Nice entry.
I kind of wish there was a little more narrative at some points in the story (you know... to give it a little more atmosphere) rather than just an ongoing storm of dialogue. Aside from that it was very entertaining.
Very scooby doo-ish!
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And I would have gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!
That was cute. Interesting to see a convincing clever Dash.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I had fun writing it, but I don't think it really got itself much of an audience, though I'm sure the fact that it is a RariDash story probably had something to do with that. I even put it up on Halloween! Clearly I didn't have a spooky enough cover, because as the show taught us, everyone judges books by their covers, even though they know better. That's the right lesson to take from that episode, right?
i totally liked the pairing hehe i can see a mater vertion of the cople comeing. yay
Holy Celestia! this story is so good!!!
If this is real and if me, the alicorn of the 22nd century, could see that with my real eyeballs, I would actually faint because it was soooooooo goooooooood.
10 out of 10 Rainbow laugh
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An oldie but a goodie, eh?
I'm glad you liked it!
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Your welcome
And nice rhyme too
Best Pony is so brave!
Fantastic little story. I love a good reason to ship Raridash. And I found this (neatly shelved) right in time for the Halloween season!
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Hah, thanks! Tis the season for this story.
I need to finish more of my seasonal work.