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Joined February 2012
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    Cerulean1313's Stories (8)

    • Cutie Mark Catastrophes
      Cutie Mark Crusaders find their marks and look to new horizons; taming colts for themselves.

      215,467 words · 6,336 views · 533 likes · 9 dislikes
    • The Risks of Braving a Storm
      Storm Blitz, a massive pegasus, comes to Ponyville after his grandfather dies.
      87,479 words · 4,176 views · 446 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Under the Starry Skies
      Silver Moonshine opens a tavern in Ponyville, hoping to escape the city and maybe find a nice mare.
      129,502 words · 3,337 views · 382 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Song of Whispers
      Fluttershy befriends a pony who refuses to speak, believing his voice causes only disaster.
      180,578 words · 3,356 views · 397 likes · 9 dislikes
    • Tears in the Snow
      82,999 words · 5,317 views · 501 likes · 20 dislikes
    • Unplanned Parenthood
      68,952 words · 3,687 views · 343 likes · 16 dislikes
    • Touch, Don't Taste
      4,276 words · 2,493 views · 162 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Just a Sniff of Friendship
      13,030 words · 712 views · 72 likes · 3 dislikes
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    Storm Blitz is displaced from his home in Cloudspire after his special talent causes several pegasi to become severely crippled.  His adoptive father, the renowned politician Proud Skies, sends him to live with his grandfather in a gated off community for retired Wonderbolts.  When his grandfather suddenly passes away, he goes to the only remaining relative he has, his earth pony birth father in Ponyville.

    Story number two in my series.  A collaboration effort between myself and OminousBrony.  If you haven't read "Tears," then some of the circumstances will make no sense, so read that first!

    Picture by askheroichamburger of DeviantArt

    First Published
    6th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    27th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 282 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ... Crap, I really DO have to read Tears in the Snow, don't I? XD

    I CALL SHENANIGANS!!!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I love how Twilight is handling her pregnancy XD.

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    god damnit!! make with the new chapter soon!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::twilightangry2:

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Whoa, Scootaloo fits somehow just right in this story now- let's see what happens in next chapter. Keep up the good work good chap!

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>296092

    Oh, just wait until later. If you like this, you're going to love what we have planned.

    >>302612

    Glad you like it so much.

    >>302984

    Glad the part with Scootaloo is liked. I was worried it might seem kinda forced. Glad it wasn't

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>303088 yeah man, i loved the fuck out of the previous story and this one is getting really good!:pinkiehappy:

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    WHAT?!?:pinkiegasp:

    Great job man can't wait for the next chapter

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Interesting so far.  The only suggestion I have is that you should make use of the horizontal rule to point out breaks where your story shifts perspective or setting.  Otherwise it gets difficult for the reader to track.  :moustache:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>303734

    That issue will be taken care of shortly.

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    XD I'm not sure if I should read this a second time or not so I know what to comment! xD The downside of being an impromptu pre-reader.... *Sighs*

    Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! 8D

    ~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #12 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>303734

    Horizontal rules have been inserted into chapters 1 and 2, and shall be used in all subsequent chapters.  Thanks for pointing that out. :twilightblush:

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 66w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Two good chapters, my good chap!

    I love the punishment that Twilight put on Cerulean, blue cactus pfft.

    #14 · Chapter 4 · 66w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>309443

    There is one even bigger than that coming up. Glad you like everything though.

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    If I could speak to storm, my words would be these, "Man the hell up Nancy!"  seriously.  Not a bad fic though, keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 5 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    great chapter :pinkiehappy: up date soon, pwease:fluttercry:

    #17 · Chapter 5 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ahah! Found you, after your last story it took me a bit but i found your profile! and low and behold you had another great story. Imagine that.

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    noting rather odd fauna adorning the inside;

    Presumably you meant flora instead.  :twilightoops:

    #19 · Chapter 5 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>315829

    fixed, my bad :derpytongue2:

    #20 · Chapter 6 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Pffft a wingboner at end when she hugged Storm XD

    #21 · Chapter 7 · 66w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Another excellent chapter, keep it up.

    #23 · Chapter 7 · 65w, 6d ago · · ·
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    For some reason, I get the feeling that courtroom shenanigans will eventually ensue.  :pinkiehappy:

    #24 · Chapter 8 · 65w, 6d ago · · ·
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    HHHNNNNNGGGGFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

    (I qan haz furtchst?) :D

    #25 · Chapter 10 · 65w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Aw cute haha.

    #26 · Chapter 10 · 65w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Very nice, but I sense Cerberus creeping closer with every chapter.

    Also, daikon leek brownies...well played sir, well played...  :trixieshiftright:

    On second thought, that recipe sounds worth trying.  :pinkiecrazy:

    #27 · Chapter 10 · 65w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>330917>>330980

    Oh thank goodness these two chapters were well received. I was a bit worried about them. Glad to know it was pointless worrying.

    #28 · Chapter 10 · 65w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    *inhale*

    :yay:D'aw

    #29 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Okay, I'm enjoying your story a lot, but I really feel that Proud Skies could use some rounding out as a character.  You have a great base to build on with regards to that.  Having his wife be happier in her affair with Quakehoof than with him gives you plenty of fuel for developing a sense of inadequacy with him.  Or how about the fact that none of his kids are actually his?  Is there a specific reason for this (maybe I didn't read closely enough because I couldn't find one)?  Is he sterile perhaps?  All juicy material for fleshing out his character.  You can still have him as a villain, but I feel that there needs more than Proud Skies walking in, plotting to make everypony's lives miserable then leaving.  Other than that, keep up the good work.  :moustache:

    #30 · Chapter 11 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>334119

    My general idea for him was for people to have fun filling in the blanks themselves. If you want, he can be sterile. Or Grace just finds some way to always be on the pill with him as she does not want to give birth to his demon spawn. Also, there will be a lot more of Proud Skies being seen in several chapters.

    But there will be more to him later. Well, more to how his mind works anyway.

    #31 · Chapter 12 · 65w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    Twinge, uh oh, my "Old one sided flame is coming back and will cause misunderstanding in the current wonderful relationship" sense is tingling.

    #32 · Chapter 12 · 65w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>337997

    That is a oddly specific sense to have. Do you have any others like it?

    #33 · Chapter 12 · 65w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>337997 it's not tingling for me. She have stated that she only want to see him once, probably to rekindle a friendship.

    #34 · Chapter 13 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    this story need more moustache :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    but other than that this is the best story i have ever read.

    i liked the paart with the random kissing:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

    #35 · Chapter 13 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    And so... The three pegasi starts the shitstorm!

    #36 · Chapter 14 · 65w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is my new favorite story... It's fffffffffffffreally good.

    #37 · Chapter 14 · 65w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I get the feeling that Flying Grace not taking that evidence to the authorities or whomever is really gonna come back to bite everypony in the ass before long.  Trying to keep a guy like Proud Skies in check with blackmail is only going to make him angrier and it still leaves him free to turn the tables.  Furthermore, those letters prove that he has the means to commit some pretty unsavory deeds without even having to leave the house.  Yep, I don't think we've seen the last of him.  :unsuresweetie:

    #38 · Chapter 14 · 65w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>344694 Eeeeeeeeenope, we haven't. The only way a-holes like him learn are by losing everything, and even then, some are too stupid to learn, so... Yea-no, we haven't seen the last of him... ~_~

    #39 · Chapter 15 · 65w, 1d ago · · ·
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    har har, found a loophole at the end of this chapter.

    #40 · Chapter 16 · 65w, 22h ago · 1 · ·
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    Dun dun duunnnnnn. I'll get the fans, you get the other half of the equation.

    #41 · Chapter 16 · 65w, 22h ago · 1 · ·
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    >>348102 *snaps some gloves on, pick up some brown "waste"*

    Ready here

    #42 · Chapter 17 · 65w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Just a heads up, switched the rating on this to Teen... was originally intending for this story to be cleaner than "Tears," but alas, twas not to be. :twilightblush:

    #43 · Chapter 17 · 65w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Ahh what a sweet ending to an otherwise sadistically satisfying chapter. Props to you sir. Keep it up.

    #44 · Chapter 17 · 65w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Yet another great chapter :D

    #45 · Chapter 19 · 64w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Haha, cruel truth have been discovered! :derpytongue2:

    #46 · Chapter 19 · 64w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>357718

    Indeed. This chapter was a long time waiting ever since the first flying lesson when Scootaloo asked about their wings.

    #47 · Chapter 20 · 64w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I believe Proud Skies has just committed political suicide.  :pinkiecrazy:  Given the events of a couple of chapters ago, he may already be on his way out.  One last "Buck you!" for the road then?  :flutterrage:

    #48 · Chapter 20 · 64w, 4d ago · · ·
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    dun dun DUN!!!!!!!:derpyderp2:

    #49 · Chapter 20 · 64w, 4d ago · · ·
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    *le gasp*

    #50 · Chapter 20 · 64w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    By decree of Celestia (and probably all the elements of harmony), proud skies has been executed

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