• Member Since 28th Aug, 2013
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Bronyraptor26


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See that pony in the back right hand corner of the classroom. That's me Howler, most ponies ignore me and those who do know I exist bully me. My life sucks especially when I began to change. My teeth became sharp and my eyes changed colors. Now will somepony listen to me.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 7 )

Nice first chapter dude. Quick question. I can't tell. Is he human, anthro, or a full on pony?

i think this could a lot better if the pacing was better

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There's a tag for anthro so he's most likely an anthro... LOGIC!!:trollestia:

You could have made like 2 more chapters before ending it but instead BIG plot points are said like they are talking about what they eat

Perhaps the founding of a pack merits his own chapter. Even more descriptions of thoughts will be interesting.

I think it's lack off feelings depth.

And, how can Celestia change her POV in a blink of an eye ? Pet, test subject, murderer... Something is off.

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