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    Dear Diary,

    Tonight was magical. I know that's not how I usually talk, but it fit perfectly this time.

    It started out so wonderful, with Elusive taking me to Stargazer Hill for an evening picknick. The stars were so bright and happy, and he made an apple pie that was not too bad. Of course, my standard for pie is likely higher than most folks, and his was not bad. We laughed and talked about our families. And we both stopped talking at about the same time.

    That's when it happened. He leaned in for a kiss, but stopped, then kind of looked sad. He told me that Alex had given him a lot of help to impress me. He also made a confession. He said, "I want to tell you the truth, and I hope you won't hate me. At first I just liked what I saw, just your looks, but the more I've gotten to know you, the more I've learned what a wonderful person you are. I know you always worry about the stallions in your life, just wanting to be with a pretty lady. That was me, before. Now? Well, that's just a nice bonus. I've fallen in love with you. The real you. So now that you know, I hope you will consider being my special friend, Applejack."

    All I could do was kiss that fool.

    Signed,

    Oh so happy.

    P.S. I owe Alex a big thank you for introducing us. I'll tell him so at the train station tomorrow. I just hope Dash doesn't get upset if I hug him.

    Comments ( 21 )

    #1 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "bacd"

    #2 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    picknick

    picnic... :D

    #3 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Silly Applejack, why would she be upset about a hug? Unless she's THAT dense...

    #4 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>886678

    She is xD

    #5 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hooray! :rainbowlaugh:

    #6 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>886708 In that case, Applejack was a good friend... And she will be lucky to survive said unslaught.

    #7 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I think AJ is going to find her thunder stolen.

    "I kissed Elusive"

    "I proposed to/bucked Dash"

    #8 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dat cover, then seeing the content rating was 'Everyone'.

    You got my damned hopes up! Ah well, a look into AJ's mind is a good concept. Wonder what her writing's like...?

    #9 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "what a wonderful person you are"

    Pony.

    #10 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Uh... 'Picknick'?

    It's meant to be picnic. :scootangel:

    #11 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>888316

    Wow, I know right? Alex must have had quite the effect on Applejack.

    #12 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>888373>>886676

    Don't pick on Applekack's spelling. :applejackunsure:  :rainbowlaugh:

    #13 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>888888

    yes, I'm sure Applekack wouldn't like that ;3

    #14 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Noooooo, I thought this was some sort of AppleDash ship, but then I read it and it wasn't.:applecry:

    It is good though, but I... I.. just can't subject my eyes to such ships.:facehoof:

    Keep up the good work on your stories, you are doing great. (Thumbs up from this guy, even though it wasn't what I expected.) :ajsmug:

    From hell, to you, and back again,

    Soto Konoha

    #15 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>888958

    I'm glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

    At one point, it was going to be an attempted AppleDash ship, with Dash getting in the lifeboats. :rainbowlaugh:

    #16 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>888888

    Not sure if intentional, or just really bad typo.

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #17 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The future looks bright.

    #18 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well I think the big guy might of seen this.:eeyup:

    but only time will tell :rainbowlaugh:

    keep up the good work TechOgre

    #19 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    What more can be said than the usual good work, awesome writing, and wonderful character development?

    Rosebud.

    #20 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    BACD

    Awesome character development. Love it!

    #21 · 35w, 9h ago · · ·
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    BACD...
















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