He had watched as his world was destoryed by a monster. He had sacraficed everything to end its rain of terror. Now, wakeing up, he finds himself stareing into bright blue eyes...eyes he had seen once before once upon a memory...
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steel soul
Gonna work on that Kingdom Hearts fic at some point
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wow good ending for this chapter keep it up I'm liking the story so far
Weird jealing ability or not, he was badly hurt
I think you ment healing
“After that I bright Twilight here and she helped
I guess it was brought
All in all it's very interesting to read.
Maybe you could stick the point of view to one character for a bit longer and leave some of the stuff in the dark to be uncovered later.
But don't take my tips too seriously. I am actually pretty bad at writing.
Still a good story so far !
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thanks...i do need an editor for this...
3495153 is kazuki your made up OC or is he from some anime
3840159 made up oc
3842376 cool hes a wolf or hedgehog cause he kinda looks like a wolf
3842731 actually half bobcat half hedgehog.
3843901 oh! cool
i remember this fic i had saved it then i got rid of it cause of the lack of updates depending on how long it will take for this to update again i might be able to save it again
3967758 sorry about that
3967853 you must live
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6646801 do more of you story or is it dead and i wasted my time
Please... my eyes hurt just by reading the description.
Wrong Right
Destoryed = Destroyed
Sacraficed = Sacrificed
Wakeing = Waking
Stareing = Staring
P.S. By the way, rain is... well. I think what you wanted to say was reign