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A young colt finds himself awake, and completely alone in a wasteland. He wanders aimlessly, scavenging the plentiful resources around him, but his conscious is beginning to break as he sees hundred of dead ponies. Everywhere he goes a single question presents itself. "Where exactly did Everypony go?"

(Based of song "September" By "The Living Tombstone" Check it out here! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7FvXznPl1J8

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Comments ( 8 )

SPOILER MICTHEMICROPHONE KILLS EVERYONE

294712 I thought it was the pony himself, Wasnt it at the end when tombstone said it?

294716

Mic was the one talking...

It's fairly well. you get a sense of what is happening from the entries. I'm a buff for apocolyptic settings but even for me this is just a depressing piece. From what i can tell it is most likely that the end is near. Due to the fact that you killed both Celestia and Luna who control both the sun and moon so im geussing that has something to do with the lack of both sun and moon. But it's good. Just, a little dark.

I hope the ending isn't just reiterating the song.......

first! also, radiation poisoningis what that was, am i correct?

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True, but that was to add depth to the song, I mean really, as talented as Tombstone is, I highly doubt he can pull off both sides of that conversation and not explode the world.
To the point, the reason Mic was the one talking, was to add depth and flow, as well as make the end of that song all that much better. If fact, I believe that is one of the larger reasons as to why Tombstone's version is viewed as better than Mic's

hello, i have made a group for fanfics based off of livingtombstone's "September", and your fanfic has been added to this group :twilightsmile:
it is a relatively new group, thus little to no members as of yet.
well anyways, here is a link to the group:
September by Living Tombstone Based Fanfics
new members are welcome and encouraged to join. :pinkiesmile:

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