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RainbowBob
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Cadence and Chrysalis. Making up.
And more.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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*Making out.
Fixed.
This was a pretty fun one to write. Pleasure as always, babbi.
>sees Bob has posted a new story
>hellzyea.jpg
>sees it's F/F
>mefreakin'gusta.jpg
>sees it's Cadence x Chrysalis
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This is why I wub you, Bobby!
OMG you used the words "past sins" together in your description,
Don't you know that Pen Stroke has a monopoly on those two words? For shame.
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*Making love.
Now it is fixed.
Orgasm achieved.
my fav. ship and one of the best i saw in awhile
Wide what? It feels like there should be a bit more here.
Sees RainbowBob post a new story "Wonder what will it be about this time!"
Sees story is about Cadence and Chrysalis in anthro "Well, this is unexpected"
Sees story has F/F, Mature and Sex tags "HELL YEAH NIGGA!"
Reads story. static.someecards.com/someecards/usercards/1350586596789_7197125.png
Good, and touching.
Also some good touching.
This was actually beautiful. Boners aside, this wasn't your average clop. It was, as Cadence put it, love. And boy, did I love this. Keep up the good work
I'm not going to disgrace this by calling it anything crude.
Honestly, this was a skillfully crafted piece of writing. Your pre-readers did a good job of advising you on this, and if there were any errors, I didn't see them. That's only the technical side; there was an emotional content to this besides just the love scene. Take note of those two words, because you don't really see them stated as such. It's called other things, but rarely is it called that.
This is love, and it's different from outright clop. It's, like Cadence said, an emotional connection, and I felt that here. Since Cadence is effectively the Princess of Love, this is fitting. Suitable. You don't see things like this, done like this.
Faved, liked. Will read in a bit more depth after work.
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<(")(")> <(")(")>
14/17
good job!!!
I'm gonna be honest, this could use a little more editing...
Very well done. The pacing and transition was well written, and the ladies were very in-character. One hundred years have changed them, obviously, but it's still believeable.
Honestly, Cadence's explanation of why love and sex coincide is very meta. If we can't get emotionally involved in the characters of a clopfic, then it's far less satisfying. But of course, you succeeded without a doubt. One of your best, Bob. Remember that.
exactly what i enjoy reading. thanks guys :)
Millennia is the neuter plural of the second declension neuter word "millenium." The correct word here would be "millennium", as in one thousand years. Millennia refers to multiple thousand-year periods.
good one. This will be the first time that i love a clop story. I should not even call this a clop. It is too good for being called like that.
The emotional content in this story is just fantastic. Stories like this are incredibly rare.
Followup?`Please? Like pretty please with sugar on top?
That being said, I greatly enjoyed this story. I thought some of Chrysalis' vocalizations during the act itself didn't really fit into the general tenor, but that's criticism at the highest level. A princess of love and a creature that feels on love... seems like the most natural ship in the world if you think about it. More of this, good sir, the world demands it!
this could so easily turn into so much more than a one-shot
one way or the other, liked and faved
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In that case, it should just be "in millennia."
My point was that "a" indicates a singular, and millennia is a plural word. It would be like saying "a cows."
G
enius truly genius.
Great story, Bob. Seriously, you're my top favorite author on this website and I'm so glad to be one of your followers. Keep it up!
I must say, that was beautiful on many many levels.
Well done good sir....I very much enjoyed this rousing piece of sexual literature.
awesome
I knew this story was sex-based from the get go, but that still came out of left field for me. If there's one thing in literature I feel I'll never fully grasp the concept of, it's stories that make great achievements in characterization just mere sentences before vivid descriptions of cunnilingus.
Look-at-what-popped-into-the-feature-box-on-Halloween!
It's time to invite this story to my slumber-party-of-one tonight.
*slow applause*
Awasome story would be cool if you continued it
For some reason, I thought this was tagged incomplete. And here I was, getting my hopes up. XD
Lovely short story.
3422006 I felt the same way about Chrysalis's demands/shouts. They seemed out of place. I still enjoyed the rest of the story.
I don't even ship this, but since RainbowBob wrote it, and it was in the Featureds, I had to read it... and I loved it.
3420209 Wait you were reading this at work?
"Clitoris" was spelled three different ways, and none of them were correct. Was that intentional?
Aside from that, a stellar example of how explicit content doesn't preclude genuine emotion.
Yes. Very yes.
soooo what's it about -.o?....
also link to image source plox?....
Would you like to make more of these? I would like to see this continue!
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-Lumino
There better be a sequel.
And there better be a threesome in that sequel.
EEEEEERG!!! The first one made me cry
The ending was so sad and I was so hoping Shining and Chrysalis would turn out together! I haven't read this one yet, but I'm sure I'll be blubbering again. I usually don't read anything with a Human or OC Tag but the first one was sooo good that I gotta read this one!
Just finished this sequel and it was beautiful. I did cry, again
But the ending was perfect.
Shining died and never got back with Chrysalis?
But at least Chrysi has someone new to love.
Beautiful. An excellent blend of a very emotionally satisfying and well-written story, and great, great clop. Bravo!
You've earned a like and a favorite. Also, I bet Shining's havin' a grand ol' time watching them from Heaven!
Wow... just wow. I don't think I've ever seen a fic like this that was as well written.