• Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
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electreXcessive


I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

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After months of royal business and no time to play, Princess Twilight Sparkle arrives in Ponyville. Melancholy settles in as she continues to observe her friends go about their lives, busy and carefree, without her. If only Spike could cheer her up... What is there for a princess to do?

Author's Notes: A collab with my good friend Flint Sparks. Seriously. I collab with this guy all the time.

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Comments ( 16 )

Hmm how to cheer up a princess...
Oh i know!
*Puts muffins on his ears and hooves*
Princess Twilight Sparkle!
I am The muffin man!
I am here to destroy you for reasons,
That will only being explained after my defeat.
And these reasons will be vauge and confusing!
Mwahahahaha!

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I've seen you around a lot lately. I find you quite interesting. :rainbowwild:

3407478
Well thats not what most people say about me,
So thank you for your kind words!:pinkiehappy:
And i hope to be around for a long time to come,
Who knows, some day i might even write a story.

3407506
I'd enjoy seeing that actually. Link me if you ever do; I'd like to read it! :twilightsmile:

3407426
I have to follow this guy! He's quite amusing!:rainbowlaugh:

The alicorn thing, I'm cool with. The princess thing is too much.

3407552
Amusing?
*Puts on his monocle and Top hat*
I take offence to that sir!
*Slaps you with a muffin*

3407579

*Eats muffin while being slapped*

That's all you got!

3407591
Hmm so you like muffins 'ay?
*Presses a button*
I hope you like mega muffins!
.....
.......
*Nothing happens*
Hold on.
*A small shadow apears on the ground, and rapidly expands*
Mwahahaha!
*Laughs evily and looks up*
Behold my Muffinosity!
*A muffin the size of a skyscraper lands directly on your head*

3407608 You know what, I'm gonna follow you... :rainbowwild:

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You can try ,
But you see,
i am a master of disguise!
*Puts on fake mustache*
You will never find me!
*Walks into the shadows waving his arms in little circles as he goes*
Woosh woosh woosh

I really liked this story :twilightsmile: All Spikes' lines were written really well (Probably one of the best I've read), and I couldn't help myself from hearing his voice in my head when I read them :rainbowlaugh:

This is a very good one-shot.

My mind went somewhere dark with the ending of this, haha. Instead of a surprise party, I thought she would come out of her castle realizing she was away longer than she thought and everypony was dead.

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