The sun was setting off in the horizon as the birds sung their last shrill melody of the night before retiring to the safety of their nests, the bees buzzing near flowers began to die down as the sun dropped and the gentle splashing of fish in the river began to cease as the night encouraged bountiful rest. Fluttershy sat outside her small cottage admiring the beautiful scene created for her by the beautiful mixing of night and say, she was tired that night and was about to prepare for bed when something began to make her nose twitch...
That was a good story... do more
Wow... that was dark.
Amazing work. The EMOTIONS!
I'm sure the hugbox effect will keep the stars up so I'll just leave this here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6L40yCCtuuQ
The one problem is that you had Spike die in the fire, even though he mentioned in the episode Griffon the Brush Off that dragons are fireproof.
12117 Hmm... Didn't think of that... I can't really change it now but if I make a re-write, I'll keep that in mind.
Thanks for the heads up!
Wow. The ponies in Ponyville are real dicks. They know Fluttershy and they should know that she wouldn't bother anypony unless it was a real emergency. F*** you Ponyville. Have fun with that fire of yours.
We need more slow torture deaths like this!...... I am a twisted person
No offence, that was great, but... how do you untrack?
5/5 no more slow death, no flutterdeath... please...
grimdark masochistic fluttershy... sad... wierdly i feel kinda numb to emotion after this... normally when fluttershy dies i want to cry... wierd
hm, that story was very adequate. Well done!
>>>>>rainbow dash the awesome
I thought he died by breathing in the smoke o well