After a failed science experiment at the 2018 International Science Fair, 15 year old Joseph Speed get transported to a new world of friendship, kindness, and happy ponies. At first, life is good. He meets all of the mane six and some other ponies and he find himself happy. But all goes to hell when Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra team up seeking revenge on the ponies who had defeated them before. Will Joseph be able to save the new world he has come to know and love dearly? Or will his efforts cause a massive apocalypse of the world, causing the fall of Equestria.
Chapters (1)
Oh no,
Queen Crysalis and Sombra are attacking joe!
*Jumps infront of joe*
Dont worry joe!
I will stop them!!
*Takes out a muffin and throws it at a redicules speed*
Take that!
*The muffin travels 2 feet and hits the ground*
Uhh...
Welp i tried.
*Walks away*
Let me know how the fight goes joe.
3406444 Your pic goes along with your comment lol. Btw you should check out his songs on youtube. Pretty good (its dubstep) If you want look up Darkspeed happiness, corruption, and turnover and let him know what you think.
Erm, it's okay, but you definitely need a pre-reader. And your paragraph/dialogue spacing needs a lot of improvement.
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yeah i realized that. but it was afterall typed up on my phone.