When a young colt earns his Cutie Mark through being mean, he struggles with the idea that he might have an evil destiny. The Mane Six try to convince him otherwise.
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Anyway, a favourite from me, look forward to seeing more!
Pretty good.
Well to be perfectly honest, I can kinda understand why they wouldn't accept a COLT to be one of their instructors.
Seriously, neither he nor his mother thought this through when they went there?
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I've edited that bit to make it sound more like a long-term goal.
With that potion I kinda expected Zecora to pull a placebo trick, making him believe he is purified of the evil, while actually just giving him some tea. But I am curious how it will continue, although I have a vague idea.
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Just figured out his cutie mark is thunder clouds
Kinda stupid, and the pictures ruin the immersion, but at the same time, sweet and could have a lot of potential if you re-wrote it longer and more plot-developed.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
I love it!