Rainbow Dash has always felt the need to be free and unrestricted. She feels that she is trapped in the world with no place to go. That's why she takes a great interest in space. Wide, free, and everlasting, space is the perfect place to be for Rainbow. However, she knows little to none about space itself, and some of her friends seem to shun the idea of traveling into the universe, but not all of them. With the help of the always intelligent Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow just might have a chance of fulfilling her dream. She might even take a "friend" with her. Will she pull off a miracle? Or will the dangers of the final frontier be too great for her to handle?
Chapters (8)
please go easy on me. First fan fic ever. In anything.
A couple of statements:
I might suggest longer chapters, although this is a minor quibble. I'm terrible at adding length, myself.
I'm eager to find out how Dash knows about NASCAR.
I wonder why Twilight won't forgive her. As far as I can recall, this is bigger than any apology she's ever given in the show.
You've got great grammar.
Tracking.
Thank you for you're imput, totallynotabrony. To be honest, the NASCAR section was a fluke. I guess I was in a racing mood, since I literaly typed that paragraph not long after the Daytona 500.
Although, an interesting idea just popped into my head that will probably make it work, however it might take a little time for me to squeeze it in. As for the apology.........well you'll see soon enough. I plan to release the next chapter no later than Wednesday. Thank you for tracking.
Anyone see what I did there with the character names from "My Little Human?"
288031. I'm pretty sure you don't need people to go easy on you
485780 Well, it's my first fan fiction, and I'm a little afraid of what people will think of it. Do you know what I mean?
485780 thank you for the favorite, by the way.
I would like to know if ponies can survive in space without oxygen or some other substance that they breathe or if they breathe at all.