If you told me the Infected overran the world four years ago, I'd say 'that's old news'. Humanity fighting for survival? Yep, heard it too. Getting sucked into a colorful alien planet by seemingly pure coincidence? Well...that one's new. Now stuck with anthropomorphic ponies (best way to describe these aliens), we have absolutely no idea as to what to do. All we know is that we have to return, with or without these ponies' help. Things are about to get very interesting....for better or for worse.
Note: Unlike most stories, the characters spend a LOT of time (4 whole chapters) on Earth before leaving. Rated T for violence and swearing. Mane 6 tag for general appearances, but main pony is Twilight.
Chapters (23)
Boondock saints is that where you got " catch you on the flip side" from?
Not often you see a story starting with 30000 words right off the bat. It's almost unheard of when there is a human (or humans) in the story. I am definitely checking this out.
Hmm... five?
Simply tell her you don't have time and leave despite what she says that would be funny!!!
Thanks to everyone who took the time to check out my story! It's my first one, so feel free to be critical (I can only improve if someone critiques after all).
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Jonathon's too kind to just blow her off, but Eddy might find a...tactical disadvantage in meeting a pony princess in a town full of other ponies. What happens? Hmm...next chapter!
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I have been working on this for the better part of 3 months, so I had quite a bit written already. I was too chicken to post until recently. Also to answer your question, by five I mean the four main human characters and Phoenix (It's why they're on good terms).
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I just heard the phrase before, I'm not sure where it came from.
3382352 The 4 guys and Phoenix.
My curiosity is peaked. I'll read on!
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Ahh, I see. That's what I get for reading while eating.
It's been a while since I have read something good, keep up the good work (thumbs up)
Oh yes. I am enjoying this immensely.
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Wow. That was... sad... Ouch.
Ok, Buddy. If you want more views, you need to add this story into some groups.
This is going great! My interest is peaked and I will defiantly be reading more. I like the multiple perspectives too.
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Thanks for the feedback, I was wondering what people thought of the multiple perspectives. You won't have to wait long, Chapter 8 is already ~3200 words in! I think I can knock it out before test week.
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What other groups would you suggest? I'm not familiar with many groups (new here), so forgive my ignorance.
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well some pony in there is indeed probably dead
Somebody pick up that phone because I called it!
I probably would've acted just like Eddy, except out of panic instead of thinking it was a trap.
It's all too easy to snap.
I havent read on yet but why do i feel as if Pheonix is going to screw them
Mike is too friendly that's just asking for trouble.
God that ending was brutal. Reminded me of a Stephen king film.
Ooooh snap, he's gunna get it
I would've had my air rifle with me, nothing says fun like a flashlight and death. I mean counte surprise.
I will read on I like zombie story's and id like to see what and how they get to the other world(side note in all the ideas I have had for a hie I always fined my main character having the princess destroys the guns they may have I can see so many things going wrong if they ever get ahold of guns)
so far not bad like a really good low cost monster film
(a b-movie as it where not that's a bad thing there are many great b-movies out there 
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ma-nards is better they have sky lights(at least the one in my town dos)(an yes I know not spell as such)
holy crap im glad I pushed through (what was for me at least) a slow start in the first chapter and um I have never gotten teary eyed about some dudes in a group hug about to die wtf
ok I don't know why any of them would want to go back to that hell that was earth even if they had friends or family left. but send eddy back because if you don't odds are that s.o.b(yes I know he is the way because of people backstabbing the group in the past but dam Sam take the stick out your ass and use it for a club if you must). is going to get someone killed o fuck if he and dash meet someone going to die get rid of eddy now for the love of god
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It's that sense of loyalty and will to fight that drives them to go back; despite the ugliness, Earth's still their home. Don't worry though, this won't be one of those "and then they went back to Earth and everything was immediately fine, the end" kind of stories. Oh no, I have plans for this one! Also, Eddy + hot-headed pony + more ponies to annoy him = what could possibly go wrong!?
3500061 well im just here for the ride(this a good story im glad I have it the time).......are we there yet?....I have to pee....can I push the red button?.....but I wants it now
*leans in and whispers* "I'm going to rape you till you can't walk"
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HAHAHAHA XD!! The sad part is that it somewhat fits, but not really...does that make any sense?
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Don't think about it jut blurt things out and hope the police isn't around.
Eddy, why? I liked you so much! And now your going to that one guy that 'opens up' and falls in love ,or something along those lines. I don't want to do this, but you forced my hand. Edgar is now my favorite. Goodbye. *walks away bawling eyes out*
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Oh Setablaze53, you have no idea what's coming...no idea at all *Evil laugh*.
3586011 Of course I don't. I have to wait and find out. But there's always that one guy! He falls in love and is either happy for all time or they break up and everything get all confusing. Maybe it's just my 13 year old mind talking, but that's why I try to avoid the romance tag most of the time. I mean, I don't mind romance like hugs and kisses and the occasional make out or whatever but there are so many fics on here that I love and then all of a sudden it goes from a hug here or there to borderline clop.
am loving this. can't wait for next chapter
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Well, I can assure you now that I don't intend to go anywhere near the clop line. Also, I've seen a lot of stories as well where the main character gets one or more of the Main 6 to fall in love with him instantly or in an absurdly short amount of time. That's just sad, not to mention totally unrealistic. Love, especially between two entirely different species takes time. Also, think about Eddy's character for a moment (hint, he's not going soft anytime soon, wait till i have some real time to write this story!). It might seem like they're getting along now, but he's definitely going to screw that over, one way or another!
finding this new chapter first thing in the morning was a great start to the day
and I don't now a thing about tech at least not the level that is used in the story how accurate is it? if its not well it wounds like it is so that why I was asking
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The tech is pretty accurate. Being an Electrical Engineer (college still, but you know what I mean) in real life helps me a lot! The pack is like a battery pack for houses with real solar collector systems, only those houses usually have 12 volt batteries (like the ones in your car) and a 12 volt DC to 120 Volt AC converter. Since Eddy used a huge number of Ultracapacitors (Which are real by the way, just not at tens of thousands of Farads yet), he went straight to 120 volts and simply used a DC to AC converter. Informational video, if you want to learn about them.
3587574 I will see the video it will be nice to learn something new and if it helps me get a handle on tech terns used in the story so much the better thanks
I can totally see why dash would come to that solution. Works pretty well too. First oranges, then a mutant army!
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Thanks for the feedback!
omg finally a story where the first thing Rainbow doesn't attack the new people in town,
oh and i cannot wait until your next chapter is released, i would really like to read that event and to read the reactions of all the "Ponies" that watch his memory. 
Eddy you ass!
they are not going to sleep like forever now some one send his ass to the moon plz 
He has good aim. Really good aim. Apple at fifty metres while drunk using a pistol? Damn.
...in other news, what ungodly unmodified pistol carries twenty rounds?