• Member Since 1st Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 15th, 2014

GreysonWest


I'm a real life private investigator, inspired to be one by sherlock holmes and the anime "case closed."

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Stormbringer and his brother Stormbreaker make a trip to Canterlot to visit their dying father, and Stormbringer must confront the stallion who he feels ruined his life. However, while talking to his father, he realizes that the situation isn't quite what it seems, and finally discovers who the true enemy has been the whole time. The resulting confrontation reshapes part of Canterlot's garden park, and brings an emotional weight to Stormbringer's life that he was never prepared to deal with.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )

Mhm...Is not bad

O3o... is actually pretty good. I commend you.

287561
Thank you! I was sort of nervous about uploading it here, because I'm not using any canon characters at all, just OC's.

great story. i think i could be expanded upon and maybe use some more details but other than that this is awesome.

288621
Yeah, it's going to be expanded upon, this is actually a minor prequel story to what I'm actually working on, the project so far is called Shadowfall and it takes place in Manehattan as a full-on mystery for Stormbringer to solve.

289310
:pinkiegasp:REALLY! :pinkiehappy: I eagerly await the full story then.

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