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CalculusFilly


I'm actually a slab of beef jerky with a top hat and a cool microphone.

Comments ( 21 )

A lovely story. Leaves me wanting more. MOAR! :scootangel:

yay calcs alive. stupid work. ill have to read this later, man i love wingplay.

3360020 Thank you :pinkiehappy:

3360598 Yes, I am alive, luckily :twilightsmile:

I loves me some good wingplay. Excellent work Calc. Perhaps we'll get to see how Rainbow repays Rarity's generosity some time? ;)

3362235 HEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH We'll see :raritywink:

another win calc,and damn fine wingplay i am rather hoping along with several others that we get to read the reciprocation :pinkiehappy:

It was alright. Short. I just called something 27,000 words short, and this is tiny by comparison. Would've liked to see at least another chapter.

No major bad things noticed.

Final score: 3/5, the perfect middle.

3368026 Oh, yeah, I know it's short. I mere 2k words is like a baby fic. At any rate, thank you for reading! My others are slightly longer, so they have more time to get things in there.

Anyway, thanks for reading :twilightsmile:

Also, I always right Rarity as an awesome nymphomaniac.

“write” is right right here, not “right”. :-p

Otherwise, great story!

3525277 GOODNESS GRACIOUS!

Well...
That's embarrassing.

:twilightblush:

Ladies and gentlecolts, it has been proven that I am officially a dumbass!

:facehoof:

Thanks for pointing that out, hehe.

Awesome little story, with just enough of a hint that Rarity's got more experience with wings than she lets on. Very clever.

Really good, but I am curious about what Twilight and Pinkie were doing.

D'awwww that was adorable. I'm... not sure it counts as cloppy, since it was very tame and non-descriptive, but that's s how I like it <3 Nice work

Comment posted by CalculusFilly deleted Mar 9th, 2015
Comment posted by CalculusFilly deleted Mar 9th, 2015

Fun story to read and I found interest in it.
Although a little disappointed there's no chapter two for rainbowdash paying back rarity.
Other wise a great FIM FIC.

3990117 *cough* *points at other story, titled Diamonds are a Mare's Best Friend*

5752123 Heeey, You're Alive... Congratulations!

That was cute. :rainbowkiss:

I'm glad this didn't end up as a RariDash shipping story.
It's more adorable.

This was a trip. The intimacy of the preening was well written, and I loved the reactions each girl had.

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