Good premise

Let's see the rest when it comes.

Keep at it sir

Nice, but it feels like it is missing something... oh right it is missing the next chapter.

and that is why I steal books from the Royal eyes only chamber.

Honestly, this story is going to be nothing but a source of cheap laughs. Scootachicken, YTP, it's all in there. There's also going to be some interaction humor. Rather than the original 'OMG he's a monster' they will have learned their lesson with Zecora. Of course, they'll still be wary of him, but I'm thinking more like Pinkie Pie get's so excited, starts jumping on him, and accidentally breaks his ribs sort of thing.

i like this its nice to see things on Celestia's perspective once in awhile.

>>284538284538 That's part of why I wrote it. There's lots of Luna out there, but nobody takes the time to get in Celestia's horseshoes. As for the 'what harm could an otherworldly bunny do?' part, I'm glad somebody got the hidden Monty reference.

What is up with fimfiction today? For a while the site was on an angle, then all the buttons went upside down when I hovered over them, and then all the comments posted were blank.

>>286206286206 I feel you bro. Good thing I don't write on this site

>>286206286206

CANT TRUST DA SYSTEM!

I'm starting to like this story. It feels kinda light hearted.

Man, you are a machine of stories. Where do you come up with all these ideas (and time)?

I can say that this story is..... A true joy to read

Keep at it sir! (will you kindly?)

i need another chapter plz

Love it keep it up

>>286517286517 Because I type over 60 words per minute, and what I type comes directly from my dreams. Seriously, I think up all this stuff at night. Which is why when I can't sleep I can keep writing, but it prevents me from getting any new ideas, so I kind of need balance.

"Since she had already summoned him once, she just had to keep the circle there."

Summoning circle + oblivious Luna = Uh oh...

>>287589287589 Shh, no giveee awayeee ploteee

this is very interesting. a cool concept, and pretty well written.  keep it up!

Oh I can feel where this is going *smirk*

That man from Peru shit was funny

Thank you

I love this, I love your writing style and the speed that you update, please, continue.

"She wondered if they acted like monkeys as well."

DO YOU LIKE BANANAS!?!??!?

this was an excellent chapter.

>>289663289663 now... that would just be mean!

funny banannas refrence commenter!

i also liked the spongebob rhyme.  this is a VERY interesting story, id imagine the main char would be more disturbed by the slave thing though.

>>289858289858 Remember, his life is boring as hell. He'd rather be a slave to a magical talking pony and have a little excitement then just sit at home. Besides, she's proven to be a kind master, other than making him hold his breath, and if he's in Equestria, since she's the princess, he'd probably just end up doing whatever she told him anyways. Disobeying a nations ruler, especially when they can fry you from orbit is a bad idea.

o_o *gives chicken a hug* It's ok. We don't ALL think you're Scootaloos....

....

wait.

...I think I screwed up there, somewhere... e_e *hugs the Scootaloo instead...*

o_o I .... LIKE it. Tracking this Target! :D

Sorry but I can't contain myself much longer MOAR its AWSOME

Speaking of Spongebob "IMAGINATION" *rainbow hands*

Speaking of this story, MOAR plz

And then Celestia got a skittles addiction. The end.

TASTE THE MOTHERFKIN RAINBOW.

TASTE THE MOTHERFKIN RAINBOW.

MOAR please, if thats ok with you

Bitches love skittles.

We want MOAR, it's almost addicting to a point!

Keep at it sir!

lol, hey Celestia, Taste the rainbow!

Honestly, huge fan of your mane series. This story on the other hoof is actually more interesting (I think at least). My interest has been aroused. WHEEEEEEEEEEW!

A pack of skittles...yes, just, yes. Bravo Sire, Bravo.

Can't wait for more. Love this sooo much

more now

Mental Lune abusement..... Yay!

i know im being a bit hypocritical from previous comments, but it seems like this story was a bit too focused on explaining some things.  remember if something does not seem reallistic it should be changed to seem better, not given a explaination...

i really say this because i want to give some sort of constructive crit.  i dont want to leaqve you with awesome story, and then be done with it.

dont let anything i say lower your morale.  this chapter was great, and i cant wait to see more!

also this is just a pet peeve with the whole slave thing largely.  i cant find too many other examples of it.  (goodbye my whole comments legitamacy!)

well hes boned, he proberly should of paid more attention to video games, would of know how to unsummon himself

>>295659295659 They'll find a way to send him back, and then he'll have to decide whether or not to do it.

>>295681295681 If this goes how I think it will, we all know the outcome of him staying or leaving.

I totally thought of Tragedy in Black when he couldn't be unsummoned after giving them the Skittles

I hope things get better, *sniff* sorry  a tear formed in my eye

Good chapter man, keep at it

this is getting goood..

Fukkin skittles. But I was right bitches love Skittles.

Good story! Have staches and a flutteryay!

Your an excellent story teller.

Yeah, while I do agree that a lot of this story is explaining things, at the same time, that's what I meant it for. This entire story is supposed to be about explaining interactions between the human and the ponies. I know I had to go all mythological with explaining how summoning works, but that IS the plot device for how he got there, and now that he's stuck there, it's going to be a long time before I have to go back to it. I will eventually, as he's smart enough to find a loop hole, but it's going to have him interacting with the rest of Equestria first.

dddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnn another good chapter

looks like i owe my freind 5 bucks.........damn

Im starting to think you making these stories just to mess with the charecters.

>>295977295977 Every good story needs conflict, something to overcome, whether it be a villain, or some aspect of a character they overcome themselves.

A few questions for you my good sir...

Shipping?

Length?

Which kind of skittles?

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeew*BOOP*

>>296173296173 Either way this just proves that M&Ms are better. They never got anyone stranded in a tv show with no hope of returning.... You better not alter he chapter to switch out Skittles with M&Ms.

>>296173296173

Like esopbelac asked, will there be shipping in this (possibly Celestia, Luna, one of the others, etc)? Just curious.

Also, I love how you added conflict to this story by having him become stuck. Way too many authors think that the only way to create conflict is to have an evil villain show up. This ruins 90% of them for me since they end up having one or more characters act OOC, such as Celestia being a tyrant, or other such things. Nice to see there won't be any of that in this story.

Length? Shipping? Hmm. NOT TELLING

Either way, still interesting and funny. Nice job.

make him get blueblood no HiE is a story without blueblood getting hurt, insulted, or taught a lesson

>>307217307217

or better yet all 3  

I'm waiting  for more

Please keep at it

OOH! this is good! keep working on it!

HERP DERP SIR!

translates: Good story Sir!

very interesting.  I am liking the characters in this chapter, seems to have a lot of possibility!

Enjoying it, hope to see a new chapter soon.

alex should make a skateboard to troll Grisworld

I like this story so far. Given how Fiddle Stick reacted, i cant wait to see how Twilight will.

this is a cool story bro

i really want another chp. soon

>>316830316830

We are all waiting for it

Also I can't wait till next update

i REALLY like the dialouge and characters now. im not sure why, but i do.

So.... Any chance of this being a Oc x Celestia story?

Damn, I wish i was able to read these as soon as they come out but alas, a wild job appeared and used stun on my free time.

>>319113319113 It's super effective?

>>319137319137 Sadly yes, although the bills seem to approve.

Poor Angel...

Good work, sir and/or Maa'm

"It's about a 60/40 ratio, for female." Alex replied.

Who in the world told you that? If it were that dramatic we would be having some serious bachelor issues(if I made light of it).

I have circled March 22nd and labeled "Brithday Bash" on the calander. Now, where did I put that time travel potion...

the 22nd can't get her any faster... i'll have much reading to do that day!

Loved that meet the spy reference you put in there, good work!

*And nothing sexual happened at all* Haha! Sorry couldnt help it. Hell I don't even know what the date is today >.< Regardless looking forward to the updates!

Meet the spy reference and I was thinking Metal Gear Solid through most the chapter. Enjoyable read.

*Bang* I am dead :C

Hmm...  This is a first...  A human in Equestrian setup that hasn't been reused a million times!  Thumbs-up bro!  

I'm likin' this...  Let's hope princey get his attitude fixed soon, though.  

>>332334332334  He probably used Wikipedia...  

While I didn't think of Molestia, I did have to reread that last paragraph.  I didn't quite believe it the first time for some reason.  

dawww,....

Can't wait for the next bit. Now to read a 15,000 word chapter....

Fun stuf, fun stuff. :)

The guards then played dead as well, having lost the game.

darnit!

>>343324343324 BAM! I totally didn't even mean that one! I guess it just comes out naturally. I've clearly been part of the internet community for too long.

i totally agree with you T_T i was playing a role playing game and made spell 63 a gender swapping spell T_T

Serenity should get some piece of Technology he makes with widget. or a lifetime supply of chocolate milk. either's pretty good.

i'm so jelly, I want to snuggle celestia. I'd rather snuggle luna or fluttershy, but ponies are awesome.

How about another confrontation with Blublood and an eventual fight between them?