Brony(duh), TS's biggest (height-wise) fan, author of the Equestria Daily featured story Barking Mad. Also a willing editor and pre-reader.
The forces of the internet are unleashed on the mane-six; taxing their nerves, wit and patience. Can the elements of Harmony win over the elements of Rage? Can they face their pasts with strength and honor? Or are they doomed to lose their Elements forever? Only the trolls will tell...
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That was pretty great. Um, one question. Although I'm pretty sure of this, the stallion that runs into Derpy... He's the troll element isn't he? Great, just great.
>>St.Patrick
Yep. And guess who he battles out of the mane-6. I'll give you a hint:
I was wondering when story like this was going to be made... I had a simillar idea a while back, but it I never got around to writing it. Anyway, I will track.
sounds like an interesting enough story. thought the stallion must have been the internet troll
if you want any help for pre reading or anything id be glad to help ya out since your new to this stuff. unless of course you already have that covered 
>>inkiepie
Also thanks for the offer, but I already have a pre-reader. I appreciate your support!
Congrats!! You win a cookie!!
Okay...I'm a little confused as to what's happening in the story. Care to explain it for a real life (R34) Derpy Hooves?
>>The Seventh Wonderbolt
Are you confused on story overall or this prologue? If it's the story overall, all shall be revealed in future chapters. If its this prologue, I'm not sure if I could explain it better than the story itself.
284162
Well, I think it's more of what's happening in the prologue more than anything else. For instance, the scene where Shears is hit by the grey streak. He identifies the streak as a mare. Are we to assume the grey streak is in fact Derpy Hooves by that? If so, then how is she back in her home so suddenly after just chasing a cloud and crashing into a pony in what I assume is the Royal Garden?
Maybe I read it wrong, and if I did, sorry about that, but it doesn't seem very clear to me.
>>The Seventh Wonderbolt
The scene in her house is the dream she was having while knocked out in the garden after crashing into one of the statues with Shears.
Really awesome prologue! I can tell already it's going to be a pretty suspensful story, but a good one too. I like how you used different view points, but it all tied together. Can't wait for Chapter 1!
284317
Ah. Told you I was a Derp.
>>The Seventh Wonderbolt
No prob
Hmm..
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It seems like it could be good if Trollface is involved.. I shall comment tracking at once!
NYAN CAT PONY!
AWWWW HELL YES!
Don't really have much else to say, other than good job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nyaning all day
Nazkan
Another amazing chapter! Keep it up!
I love the way you write.
I noticed that this says cancelled. Where were you planning to take this, if I may ask?
836001
Why thank you.
838468
I was planning on having this be a series of one on one 'battles' between each of the mane 6 and a (mostly rage faces). However it wouldn't be the meme itself, but a pony that was corrupted by Trotl (the troll pony). So for example after Rainbow's segment I planned on having Rarity 'verse' her ex, a pony morphed with the Foul Bachelor Frog. The reason that this was cancelled is because I didn't have it fleshed out enough and would have run out of ideas after RD's part. Plus the fact that I had only 6 likes and 6 dislikes told me that I should focus on something different. But who knows, I may just pick this up again.