Amateur fanfic writer and reader. Sometimes I get dreams, dreams of ponies, and wish that someone would write a story based off them. So why not me?
"Too old for free candy? Never!"
Someponies never grow up. Take for instance Sight and Songbird, two normally respectable adults with the exception of a single night. One becomes an unstoppable Prince of Pranks, the other hunts candy with every unruly method imaginable.
Ah, Nightmare Night. Childish, immature...
For Songbird and Sight, this night means more.
Cover image by Raikoh-illust.
Written for the Straight Shipping - OC-tober Writing Competition
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I love the ending.
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Thanks. I'm glad someone did.
3332429No prob, bro. Besides, seeing how good this story is, I'm amazed no comments have come up yet.
They're probably speechless.
great story really well written, see the radar didn't work too well though :p
Awwww I love when dad's are really into Halloween (or in this case, Nightmare Night). Very well written story, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing you cant fix quickly. Just in time for Halloween!
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Thanks. If you could point out a few of those pesky mistakes, that would be appreciated.
ohh..... wish I would have thought of that while I was reading.... Well, here are a few that I remember off the top of my head that were towards the ending. Very minor grammar mistakes, easily fixed. I know there were more in the main story but it would take me awhile to find them all:
"What about me?" Songbird yelled back. "Didn't you know how worried of you? I should have stayed..." (Should be "how worried I was about you?" or "how much I worried about you?" either one works, I like the first option better tho)
There was no way I going to force you to spend tonight of all night with me. ( should be "way I was going" and "nights")
"I...I'm sorry, Songs," he said quietly. "I just didn't want ruin tonight." (Should be "want to ruin")
"Idiot." The Unicorn swat the stallion with a couch cushion. (Should be "swatted")
Still a great story and I applaud you for participating in the contest!
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Thanks. I'm glad you caught those because I don't think I would have.
Okay, I didn't realize this took place in the future. Now it makes sense. I like the idea of Diamond marrying a zebra. It's cute.