• Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
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electreXcessive


I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

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“No buts. I’ll sleep with you tonight if you’d like Lulu.”

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This reminds me of when I was a kid and my mom offered to spend the night in my room. :pinkiesad2:
And then I turned eight and she made me sleep all alone with the monsters

Real talk though, this was nice.

Holy hell, great read!

That was.. quite amazing.

The description of the feeling of being unable to control herself, the shock of what she was doing effecting her even as she was doing it... Bravo.

I like this, in a strange way.

Good writing.

That was deep.

I don't know why but this story didn't reach me (it was good) but It rubbed me the wrong way I apologize

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May I ask what about it off put you? I'd like to know so that I can avoid doing so in the future.

3321336 it wasn't the story itself it was just I felt the story not endearing enough its probably nothing, like I said it was ok just it rubbed me the wrong way

3321336 like I said though probably just me

Whoa! You had dreams like these?? Repeatedly? You must lead quite a happy life during the day. Just as the night is the opposite of the day, our expressions are also the same. Our feelings kinda have a karma. If our day was bad, our night would be good, kinda like that. I wouldn't mind being your friend. :twilightsmile: but seriously those dreams were freaky! :pinkiegasp:

Damn. This was intense! I've had a similar nightmare before. :twilightoops:

Great job! Like and fav!

Hmm... not bad...

The pacing toward the end kind of falls apart, though. Also, this story makes the mistake of using the "Catapult Nightmare" trope... :trollestia:

Other than that, it was a good read. :twilightsmile:

That's how I wish I could deal with all of my problems. Unfortunately, it would appear that ripping off people's faces and feeding it to them is considered illegal or something, so fanfiction will have to do for now.

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