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Very, very funny. Written almost like a play, which lends itself well to this kind of humour.
One thing, though. About halfway through, the name "Diamond Shadow" is mentioned. I think you may have left out some text or something that gives context to that, because it (and the jokes derived from it) have no precedent whatsoever.
Still, though. Great fic.
>>11537 Insufficient screentime from which to derive them? It may be rectified after episode 2-4.
Also, this was fantastic. Every deity needs a few adorably harmless cults here and there. Especially if they're the kind whose power is proportional to the number of their followers, but that clearly isn't the case here.
Anyway, this was most amusing, and I look forward to whatever else you have planned.
>>18691 I actually wanted to continue, but... there was nothing that could top THIS ending 
>>18696 What can I say? I kinda expected to be disappointed by Luna, with "Progress", "Composure" and all those other great fics out there. And then she is even more awesome! I really wanted to use that persona in one way. I hope I nailed it 
Oh dear me. 
This is what you get for not checking in with your little sister more frequently, Celestia. She unloads two barrels of BRIAN BLESSED on the help. Let's hope Dusty comes to soon, and that her hearing hasn't been too badly damaged.
It does beg the question, though. The Summer Sun Celebration is on the summer solstice. Nightmare Night presumably takes place in the middle of fall. That's a season and a half, at least. What was Luna doing that whole time? Reading the entire palace library?
In any case, great stuff, and I look forward to more.
That was hilarious. Please contiune!
>>18733 Well, in Celestia's defence... Luna was probably a prude even by pasts standards. And who expected Phalanx to leave the break room door open?
And just to answer your question: Yes, she did hit the books. And spent the rest of the time getting that star mane back on.
>>18755 This is far from over 
Celestia: NOOOOOOO
I forgot to mention it, but I can easily see some poor woodsman and his family out in the boonies hearing the divine conversation and how they'd react to it.
"Bobby-Joe, why's the sky yelling?"
"Because you weren't in th' damn kitchen, woman! Now get me mah knife - I need to sacrifice a goat and undo the damage you done."
>>42772 The plural majestatis may be tradition, but as soon as there are two... wait, can you speak of two beings if they use plural on themselves? 
Anyhow, thanks for the nice comment. I'll see if there are more epic tales from the private life of the royal... many!
>>495344 Only the best make it to the night guard! And all are present! This is the most law abiding place in all of Equestria!
>>495594 Season 2 didn't give us much Celestia or Luna since "Luna Eclipsed", so I had little to work with. And where else would she be? Her first reaction after taking over watch duty was to start a curfew!
>>495976 CPR-ing her back to consciousness took a while...
It only opens on the outside.
Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
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