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Hawk eye 111

Joined February 2012
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    Hawk eye's Stories (1)


    Jack wakes up in ponyville after an attack on his battleship the Arizona. He makes it his mission to find out what happened, after he learns how to fly of course.

    My first story advice is appreciated.

    First Published
    3rd Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·
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    That's an interesting picture. (Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy FTW)

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Sounds like its going to be cool, I look forward to seeing where this goes.

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 67w, 2d ago · · ·
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    .....

    all i can say is

    what?

    i understood everything until the part when you got knocked out...then it was all just ???

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 67w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>288082

    I was going for the kind of story told from his perspective so you'd only know what he knew but I'll try to explain better in later chapters.

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 67w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>288199

    ooooohhhhh

    even now....im still like

    ?

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