Jack wakes up in ponyville after an attack on his battleship the Arizona. He makes it his mission to find out what happened, after he learns how to fly of course.
My first story advice is appreciated.
That's an interesting picture. (Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy FTW)
Sounds like its going to be cool, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
all i can say is
i understood everything until the part when you got knocked out...then it was all just ???
I was going for the kind of story told from his perspective so you'd only know what he knew but I'll try to explain better in later chapters.
even now....im still like