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ThatClosetBrony
I'm just that guy who hated the show, then sorta liked it, then realized that he was a brony and freaked out. Then realized that there was nowhere else to post fiction. And so here I am.
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And that's how Equestria was destroyed.
murderer isnt masculine and murderess isnt a word
I feel bad that poor good canon Ponies got killed.
Still I like What If scenarios.
By the way everyone. This will be connected to main story.
Hold up for the next chapter. Also be on the look out for a blog by yours truly for a piece of the action.
Will include Inner rage if the author contacts me.
Keep sharp eye out!
3318598 wow...he didn't wait at all. :/
Oh well. I like it.
3319693
Connected? As in a forth universe entering the conflict?
I like the story too, I just feel so bad canon Applejack was killed. It's war, so innocents will be lost.
Hopefully this other Marcus finds the truth out and feels bad about what he did.
3319728 you'll see in the blog.
See you then.
3318130 Have you read the first chapter of the original story? Redskin used the word muderess. I am writing from his character's point of view. Therefore, I must include his quirks. But thanks for the grammar lesson!
Mother of God...the likes and dislikes are balanced now!
Wait...3,666 words? 666?! YES! I'VE SUMMONED...WELL, SOMETHING!
3537804 ALL HAIL CTHULU!
Welp, there goes his mental stability.
3539144 I have a knack for doing that.
3537804
*Dressed like a succumbus waitress*
You ordered the Demon Waffles?
3648750 *pimp slaps* NO! I SAID DEMONIC WAFFLES!
People really need to calm down about the whole TCB thing. The down-votes are so unwarranted.
3852395 Why, thank you.
I'll help when I can to clean it up. You have a good grasp in Marcus growing skills with runes.
Later though, be busy this week.
3852454 I'll take it you didn't read the author's notes.
3854611 nay good buddy, I did read it. You getting it whether you like it or not.
All in all, I want to give it a facelift with more pacing.
Plus it will help me out in fleshing out Marcus fighting style. Which you pretty much got down on pat, surprise surpise!
3318130
It is
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/murderess
It an woman which murder
Unfortunately, the only way this really ends is with a heaping helping of tragedy along with Marcus going nuts...assuming we haven't already passed the latter yet.
3884404 He's not completely insane, just slightly. He's kind of in a permanent semi-berserk state, where he doesn't think things through and thinks that he is absolutely right. Just read the end of the second chapter.
Well... marcus was close to losing his mind in story anyways..
4731694 I'm assuming you're confused about something?
4731730 That makes me feel better about finding this.
4731771 Yes.
Son of FUCK! There's a lot of alt dimensions! Most excellent >:D
5469755 You are most welcome.
That was funny.
5818145 Someone thinks I'm funny?
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This is an awesome story. My ethical side is screaming at how terrible this is, but my logical side is telling me to look through the eyes of Marcus. When I do so, I start cheering for him in how brutal he's destroying the other ponies.
3518512 Just for that, I decided to unbalance it by liking the story. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET!
7187788 My god, you've done what now? You fool, don't you understand what you've done?
Well anyways, your reaction was what I was hoping for. I enjoy telling the tale of the villain, because it always makes the goodies squeamish when the world isn't in perfect black and white morality. But still, glad it turned out that well for you! I appreciate the feedback. Hopefully there'll be a new chapter out soon that'll delve into Marcus's psyche even more; it's done but there's some things I need to edit (I know I said I wouldn't edit chapters, but it's a really nice one and I wouldn't want it ruined by some silly error!), and APs have been kicking my ass lately.