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That Avi Nerd


I find it fitting that I enjoy writing, since my last name is Ward. "The Old Gaelic surname derives from "Mac an Bhaird" ("son of the Bard"). A bard being a story teller or poet." - Surname meaning.

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This story is a sequel to Broken Feathers


Rainbow Dash, Phantom Knight, and the rest of Celestia's new Task Force 247 head to Glacies, an icy nation north of Equestria, where Sky Streak and the Changelings have fled to. Glacies is in the beginning of what would be a devastating civil war, revolutionaries , with help from the Changelings, fighting against the government loyalist, and the King isn't welcome to the idea of Equestrian's in his nation, even if they're there to help him. But for Rainbow Dash, this is about more than stopping the Changeling invasion of Equestria, stopping a civil war, saving the lives of countless ponies, it's about finding Scootaloo.

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 169 )

"Fist pump" Another Chapter!!! And backstory no less!!! Thanks man, your story is great, wonderful, and all that stuff.

Very well done, can't wait for more!

3427697 Awesome story man, You're an amazing writer and i cant wait for the next chapter! Also don't think i stole the idea of my OC off Your's it was just shit luck that we made a similar ones.

Comment posted by Azhanzhang deleted Nov 11th, 2013
Comment posted by Azhanzhang deleted Nov 11th, 2013

awww.... does someone have a crush??? lol

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coughtheprincecough idk i seems like it

3489817 Yes, I know what you were referencing, I was just trying to make it seem even more suspicious :trixieshiftleft: It actually was of my intention to invoke those thoughts in the readers, I'm happy that it actually worked :twilightoops:

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good for you then! ^-^ I can't wait to see how this turns out... :pinkiehappy:

Oh Rainbow Dash....... YOU HAD EFFIN BETTER NOT HAVE SAID YES I SWEAR :flutterrage:

Please don't take long o the next chapter cause I was simply during to read this one I don't know if I can wait any more I might just die of anticipation don't let me die please

3512273 :rainbowderp: <- I think she's currently stuck with this face, she'll have to get past that before she can formulate a coherent reply lol.
3512289 :fluttershysad: Don't die, I like my fans :fluttercry: Anyway, if you haven't noticed, I keep a 'word counter' on my user page. I usually up date this every half-hour or so that I'm writing OR every few hundred words I advance. I'll warn you, though. I have the tendency to severely slack off times like now after I update the story, as a sort-of breather from the story and to allow me to collect my thoughts. I'm busy Sunday, so an update can be expected... oh... somwhere between Saturday and next Wednesday? Maybe? Probably. Depending on how much pressure I get from my friend PinkieCydni, I MIGHT get it done Friday since we don't have school then, but don't hold me to that. Hang in there, kiddo! :yay: Glad ya like the story!

Hahaha. I stormed off after seeing this , as it leaves us at a "Yes" or a mortal enemy\Prince

3512456 :rainbowhuh: Could you really imagine Rainbow Dash saying 'yes'?

3512498 Of course not, what am I stupid? But it still is a really really unlikely option. And of course, that leaves us with door 2

3512509 Don't forget about options 3 through 120
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*image from the Beatles' movie 'Yellow Submarine'

And if there aren't any objections, once I hit 1,000 total story views I'll release a picture that hints at a future scene in the story.

Liked the chapter and I think you deserve that rest for you efforts can't wait till next chapter and have a nice weekend

3526313:rainbowkiss: Thanks so much for the boost! And thruthfully I never actually stop writing. I'm always thinking and day dreaming about this story, MLP in general really, and taking notes. Like, I have the basic synopsis of what I want to do for Chapter 7, and I have three or four sentences so far describing that, but I need to figure out how to turn those sentences into 3,000+ words... More importantly, I need to come up with a chapter name haha., that's one of the bigger points in my writing process: Concept > Story Title > General Synopsis > Chapter Names based on what happens in them > then I break those chapters into content in said chapters. If that makes any sense. But still, Thanks! :twilightblush:

Take you well deserved break. I knew you were going to trick me, but THIS!!! Off to go wipe the blood off my phone.

YES! Rainbow didn't technically say yes!

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what??? she didn't technically agree to it..... :pinkiehappy:

3529097 I know, I was merely laughing at your excitable reaction at that :rainbowkiss:

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Well... Its true... SHE DIDNT SAY YES!!!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Another nice chapter and u said it was more phantom based but its ok cause he is a bad ass and keep up the good work and can't wait for next chapter

.....Princess Rainbow Dash....... :applejackunsure: yeah... nope can't see that happening

So. I do not call this filler, I call it the sign.

Where potential turns to kinetic.

3597483 That was... that was deep...
And completely awesome :rainbowkiss:

3597844 Well, when people say "filler" I say storybuilding. That's what filler is after all.

This is going to be interesting with the gallows and the coronation I wonder what will happen

Finally got the time to read this, and I have to say, it still is damn awesome! Can't await the next chapter. Oh, and I hope Rainbow will get a bit more "action" and such (Fe, she seemed pretty happy telling her storys to the royals - I would have imagined that she... Dunno, but I just know that you know what I mean :P)
(And don't forget PhantomDash, thehehe :twilightblush:!)

3642768 A) Not really sure what you mean. B) You really want this PhantomDash ship to sail, don't you? :trixieshiftleft: C) I'm hoping to get the next chapter done before the 25th, and at the same time I'll release the chapter after that because that's already finished. So, woo!

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A: Yeah, I suck at explaining things :rainbowlaugh:
B: :twilightblush:. But, I like how you are doing it - With all the hinting etcetera. Just promise me in a far future they will be a couple :rainbowwild:
C: Nice!

And just to say, I have the full faith in you to make this story as awesome as possible (Wich is already achieved for the released chapters!).

Kindly regards and sorry for my horrible english

3645932 Horrible english? I thought it was just fine. I've seen far, far worse from some of my class mates, and I'm a senior in high school...

Well I wonder what the nightingales are doing there and also very good chapter

What do I care about wait time!?!? It'll be your birthday, relax and rest mate. Also.... Great chapter!!!

I don't care how long it takes as long as I get to read it I'm good oh and epic chapter and can't wait for the next

Happy Early Birthday!!!!!

Awesome story can't wait til the next chapter!

First.
And I minds saw it coming. The pillow jousting was cool. And I loved how phantom is flipping out. This really is chaos. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Phantoms sister is the leader of the nightingtales & Rainbow will save the day - Am I right ;)?

Awesome Chapter!

3800347 That was my bad, I don't think I ever really described it enough. :twilightblush: *inhales* Recall back to the first story, when Phantom and Applejack were in that underground cell waiting for their captors to show up. Phantom heard more than sets of voices, but he only ever encounter CM and Soarin' when they break out, and those two are captured. As we all know, those two were Changelings. The reason Phantom heard more than 2 voices was because the real Soarin' and Cloud Maker were instructing their Changeling counterparts on what to do to get caught, allowing the real ones to escape to Glacies during the distraction.
Hope that cleared that up! :twilightblush:

The prince never really asked, now did he, he just declared her a princess...

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