• Member Since 18th Aug, 2013
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I'm an avid fan of My Little Pony and Avatar: the Last Airbender. Pizza is my favorite food. I love getting to share my works with others!

Comments ( 33 )

I liked it. Sub dash is best Dash.:rainbowkiss:

I actually went through and read your other two before this. You make quality clop, can't wait to see if you write anything else. :derpytongue2:

3309315 Thank you! :raritystarry:

I already have my next two stories planned out! :twilightsmile:

Is it awkward if I said that this dominatrix stuff gave me a boner in all the details? :rainbowlaugh:

3310678 Nope! :pinkiehappy: Glad ye enjoyed it, it's what I wrote it for!

Wait, what happened to Gilda? I thought Fluttershy still had her "captive"? Good job by the way.

Damn this was very hot indeed! :pinkiehappy:

3313897 What about Gilda? :rainbowhuh: I don't recall saying anything about Gilda in here.

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In the prequel to this, Gilda was captured by Fluttershy and raped. Now she's nowhere to be found. What's up with that?

3343105 Uh... I think you have the wrong author. I've never wtitten anything like that.

3343854 Then what was the...! You know what, never mind.

3343906 No no, please, I'm curious. Can you link to the story this happens in?

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... I forgot what it was called. Is there a way look back a stories you've already read?

3344852 Unless you favorited it, I don't think so.

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Darn. Yeah, it said on it that this was the sequel to it.

3346384 That's weird, as the only other two stories I've posted on here are Twilight/Zecora and Spike/Blueblood. Either someone's ripping me off, or there's a story out there with the same name as this by coincidence.

Edit: hey, is this it?

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107877/its-always-the-quiet-ones

Pro-tip: I dislike dark stories, and will never write something deserving of that tag.

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I don't think it was the same name, cause in the description to his story, there was a link to this story.

I want to read about next week!

3375279 although i hate this kind of stuff i can't leave a book half read :facehoof:

fine if i see a another chapter i'll read it :ajsleepy:

What sealed the deal for me was at the end, Fluttershy was still Fluttershy. reminding us that the whole thing was just an act, because very few people are actually like that all the time :) (except maybe Rarity :raritywink:) Good story, helped me take care of what needed taking care of :twilightsheepish:

3406822 I'm not usually a fan of this kind of stuff either. This was mostly experimenting here, seeing if I could write it. Plus I despise such stories where it's an unwilling, uneven relationship, so I thought I'd go ahead and add some variety with an equal, ultimately loving relationship.

There probably won't be another chapter.

3578328 I'm glad I was able to help there, hehe. :twilightblush:

And yeah, this story was partly written in response to the overwhelming number of fics where the BDSM relationship is actually mean and the sub is unwilling. That kind of stuff makes me feel ill with how it treats these characters.

3582862 all i can say to that is.... THANK GOD :pinkiehappy:

Note: The disclaimer is completely unnecessary (This is a fan fiction site after all.) It can be considered a distraction and in some cases, cause trouble, rather than prevent it. It would be best to remove it.

Besides that, this was very well done. :twilightsmile:

3586475 Ah, thank you for the advise. I'll be sure to fix that here. :twilightsmile:

I loved it all that just blow my mind can't get enough of this.I can't wait to see what next.

I think I came.
'checks pants'
yes, yes I did.:scootangel:

And suddenly.... Call Fed-ex! Im Shipping!!!!:derpyderp2: Anyways, ive read all of your stories:twilightblush: so far, and I like them all!! :trollestia: And so... this is my 2nd favorite ship :rainbowderp::heart::flutterrage:

4512348 :rainbowlaugh:

Honored to have ya as a fan. Twilight/Zecora is quite grand.

4516151 agreed! I like that ship too. :heart: Though I do ship a lot of ponies. :derpyderp2:

it was a good story you should make a sequel one where their "game" had some adverse effects on RD :twilightsmile:

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