• Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
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electreXcessive


I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

Comments ( 16 )

Looks interesting. I will most certainly read later, when I get the time.

Love,
Pip

A Raridash pairing? You don't see that every day.

You should see if they are interested over in this group
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/726/raridash

Good, but I think the actual sex scene is to short... :pinkiecrazy:

spare key under the doormat

YES!!!!! Now I can go into any pony's house, as all of them keep spare keys under their doormat! Never mind, if they don't have a doormat, they just slip it under their fictional doormat!

Rainbow must be spying a lot on people!

pretty good, though I prefer my lesbian pr0n insertionless. :ajsmug:

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Heh, thanks. I'm always worried it's not up to snuff, and this was my first shot at a more serious romance.

3340266

The sex and build-up could've been a bit longer, but it was still pretty sweet and sexy. Not bad at all for a first try! :pinkiehappy:

This actually wasn't that bad, you have the potential to reach higher though... maybe you should challenge yourself and do so? :duck:

I recognize this story, glad it got reworked.

this is way past cool:rainbowdetermined2:

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Definitely was not prepared for the fisting. :| That said, the setup is pretty decent, even if some of the dialogue is cheesy. I do kind of feel uncomfortable about Rarity screwing the first pony to pay her a nice compliment after she's had her self-worth trampled on, though. But I guess that's missing the point.

wonder how spike would react if he got wind of it

I think the worst part about this is simply how Dash knows what marshmallows taste like. I blame Pinkie Pie.

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